Revision Plan – 10/5/23

I am planning to structure my intro in a way where there is more focus on the direction it will go. I will try to talk more about McLuhan in my intro and I will need to think of a way to introduce him and his ideas. I will need to remember this paper is targeted towards a general audience and I will need to explain things in a way where it will be clear to an outsider what is going on. I will benefit from finding a way to make the intro more interesting in order to catch the attention of the reader. As for the body of the paper. I will need to find ways to smoothly transition from topic to topic. My paper right now is just jumping from one topic to the next.