10/05: Revision Plan

Some ideas that I want to present in my essay is elaborating my thoughts to more of a general audience. I wrote my introduction based off of those who know about McLuhan and the type of philosopher he was and the prompt presented. I will also introduce who McLuhan is as I used his ideas and quotes. I will also work on demonstrating a flow like essay where ideas, concepts, research and more are presented as I want it to be. Lastly, looking at the feedback from my last paper also helps me revise and fix occurring mistakes in my writing.