[Jenna Spevack]

Com­ment on at least 3 of your col­league’s work. Re­mem­ber to note IN DE­TAIL what works and what doesn’t. Be con­struc­tive.

If your replies do not con­tain the fol­low­ing they will not count to­ward your grade:

1. Clear iden­ti­fi­ca­tion of the stu­dent whose work you are cri­tiquing.

2. A clear state­ment about what is suc­cess­ful about the work AND WHY IT IS SUC­CESS­FUL

3. A clear state­ment about what is not suc­cess­ful AND WHY IT IS NOT SUC­CESS­FUL

4. Clear and log­i­cal use of the course vo­cab­u­lary. Refer to the list be­fore post­ing your reply: http://​tinyurl.​com/​btxv7wl

[JettoMaku]

Hello Guys! Jedd here. got some cake? jk
Here are my works.

[Xuxa Robinson]

Con­grats on sur­viv­ing every­one :D

[Daniel Aponte]

Okay peo­ple, good or bad, cri­tique the crack out of it :)

[Daniel Aponte]

Xuxa, your work was done well, the way the left arm arched was ef­fec­tive, good job.

[Daniel Aponte]

Jedd, your kite was pretty awe­some, it def­i­nitely got the point across.

[Daniel Aponte]

Sean, I could tell was the point of your pic­ture was, and the color in­ven­tory is also ac­cu­rate with your pic­ture, well done.

[JettoMaku]

@Sean Nurse
Ayooo mang. You did ya’ll work maad goo brah. i to­taly re­spek dat hard work dawg. dem skills dat ya’ll have,be mad tight brah. dem shiz­zle be pop­pin. for­re­alz. (but se­ri­ously)

@Sean Nurse
I am truly fas­ci­nated on how you used your child­hood mem­ory from when you were bik­ing.
Im sorry to say, Im just cri­tiquing, but I dont see that much that was suc­cess­ful from what the pro­fes­sor asked.
I know the ref­er­ence and the pal­let is fine, it matches the color pro­por­tion­ally and the va­ri­ety of color is good. Its
just that you need the col­ors to be right next to each other and you are miss­ing the white color.

For the Final Piece, I think it would have been bet­ter if you painted or used other art ma­te­ri­als. And it would be bet­ter if you re­sized the fig­ure and re­lo­cated it to a dif­fer­ent area( ex. top left) and to color it dif­fer­ently. I would sug­gest a muted color with pris­matic ac­cents when you have a light col­ored back­ground. And also, this seems to be rushed. I know we had lim­ited time, but if I were you, I would at least take my time with the ink­ing. That would bring out at­ten­tion to the fig­ure. You have good ex­am­ple of dom­i­nance color though.

Happy Hol­i­days!

[JettoMaku]

@Xuxa Robin­son

Good Job! :D You did re­ally well on this as­sign­ment.
You put a pris­matic fig­ure against muted dark color. you can clearly see the main thing.
And your pref­er­ence and palette is ex­ce­lent.
the only thing that is un­suc­cess­ful was using all the same col­ors from the palette for ur final.

[JettoMaku]

@Daniel Aponte

Dude! I like how you re­ally worked hard on this pro­ject.
I can tell u tried your best while doing this pro­ject. Next time, you should
use the art tools that the pro­fes­sor sug­gested. Its hard to ex­press your
work when you don’t have the right equip­ment for the as­sign­ment.
for your ref­er­ence and palette, you need to be more neat and ac­cu­rate
with your work. for your final, you showed the dom­i­nance of the blue hue,
but its hard to see the sat­u­ra­tion be­tween the col­ors if you use mul­ti­ple
art tools, there­fore, you should just stick to one.

[LimmeruBar]

sorry i was so late i for­got and i was out all day just got in i hope every­one is hav­ing fun today at the end of the world lol

[LimmeruBar]

@Daniel Aponte

i saw you did every­thing lol looks good still can be­lieve you was that lit­tle but it looks good i am happy to see it done and color gives it a 70s feel to it that i liek

[LimmeruBar]

@Xuxa Robin­son

like al­ways show­ing how much tal­ent you have i love how it came out and how big you did it the col­ors are per­fect to show how del­i­cate and dainty it is like you­u­u­u­uuu lol ^__^

[LimmeruBar]

@Sean Nurse

i like how it looks all that metic­u­lous work you al­ways do con­cen­tra­tion on get­ting it all down i am happy it came ot as good as it did luck i got there in time so you could give it some color other then the brown you said was com­ing out of ………. some­thing lol still good work bro

[Lok Tung(Wanda) Tsang]

http://​postimage.​org/​image/​6ulyyan35/

Here is my final freestudy:)