ADV1100 Graphic Design Principles 1

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    Jenna Spevack
    Participant

    Comment on at least 3 of your colleague’s work. Remember to note IN DETAIL what works and what doesn’t. Be constructive.

    If your replies do not contain the following they will not count toward your grade:

    1. Clear identification of the student whose work you are critiquing.

    2. A clear statement about what is successful about the work AND WHY IT IS SUCCESSFUL

    3. A clear statement about what is not successful AND WHY IT IS NOT SUCCESSFUL

    4. Clear and logical use of the course vocabulary. Refer to the list before posting your reply: http://tinyurl.com/btxv7wl

    #16290

    Sean Nurse
    Participant

    Ok so here it is, critique away.

    #16291

    JettoMaku
    Participant

    Hello Guys! Jedd here. got some cake? jk
    Here are my works.

    #16292

    Congrats on surviving everyone :D

    #16293

    Okay people, good or bad, critique the crack out of it :)

    #16294

    Xuxa, your work was done well, the way the left arm arched was effective, good job.

    #16295

    Jedd, your kite was pretty awesome, it definitely got the point across.

    #16296

    Sean, I could tell was the point of your picture was, and the color inventory is also accurate with your picture, well done.

    #16297

    JettoMaku
    Participant

    @Sean Nurse
    Ayooo mang. You did ya’ll work maad goo brah. i totaly respek dat hard work dawg. dem skills dat ya’ll have,be mad tight brah. dem shizzle be poppin. forrealz. (but seriously)


    @Sean
    Nurse
    I am truly fascinated on how you used your childhood memory from when you were biking.
    Im sorry to say, Im just critiquing, but I dont see that much that was successful from what the professor asked.
    I know the reference and the pallet is fine, it matches the color proportionally and the variety of color is good. Its
    just that you need the colors to be right next to each other and you are missing the white color.

    For the Final Piece, I think it would have been better if you painted or used other art materials. And it would be better if you resized the figure and relocated it to a different area( ex. top left) and to color it differently. I would suggest a muted color with prismatic accents when you have a light colored background. And also, this seems to be rushed. I know we had limited time, but if I were you, I would at least take my time with the inking. That would bring out attention to the figure. You have good example of dominance color though.

    Happy Holidays!

    #16298

    JettoMaku
    Participant

    @Xuxa Robinson

    Good Job! :D You did really well on this assignment.
    You put a prismatic figure against muted dark color. you can clearly see the main thing.
    And your preference and palette is excelent.
    the only thing that is unsuccessful was using all the same colors from the palette for ur final.

    #16299

    JettoMaku
    Participant

    @Daniel Aponte

    Dude! I like how you really worked hard on this project.
    I can tell u tried your best while doing this project. Next time, you should
    use the art tools that the professor suggested. Its hard to express your
    work when you don’t have the right equipment for the assignment.
    for your reference and palette, you need to be more neat and accurate
    with your work. for your final, you showed the dominance of the blue hue,
    but its hard to see the saturation between the colors if you use multiple
    art tools, therefore, you should just stick to one.

    #16300

    LimmeruBar
    Participant

    sorry i was so late i forgot and i was out all day just got in i hope everyone is having fun today at the end of the world lol

    #16301

    LimmeruBar
    Participant

    @Daniel Aponte

    i saw you did everything lol looks good still can believe you was that little but it looks good i am happy to see it done and color gives it a 70s feel to it that i liek

    #16302

    LimmeruBar
    Participant

    @Xuxa Robinson

    like always showing how much talent you have i love how it came out and how big you did it the colors are perfect to show how delicate and dainty it is like youuuuuuu lol ^__^

    #16303

    LimmeruBar
    Participant

    @Sean Nurse

    i like how it looks all that meticulous work you always do concentration on getting it all down i am happy it came ot as good as it did luck i got there in time so you could give it some color other then the brown you said was coming out of ………. something lol still good work bro

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