Aldo Essay 2 Draft

Aldo Pena

 

Should Protesting continue to happen during the Covid-19 Pandemic?  I believe that even during this pandemic the people should still be able to protest. Change is very much needed in society to protect the lives of those around us. Currently there are two pandemics, Covid-19 and the police force itself. The amount of unlawful abuse they have been causing is sad. No matter what Protesting is needed to lift our voices so that those in power can hear.

 

Society has been dealing with many past altercations between cops and blacks that have sadly ended in tragedy. Recently with the death of George Floyd those who have witnessed all these incidents have grown sick and tired of these killings. Not only have we been dealing with the police but also racist groups such as the KKK and those who wave around the confederate flag. This is a problem because it is very hard to get rid of these groups, especially when the government is ignoring how hateful there are towards the black community. It is also difficult for people to understand that those who are protesting during a pandemic who are being called  “Crazy” are actually just sick and tired of the violence. I believe that there should be more awareness on the issue because it is something that needs to be addressed by not only the media but the government as well. 

 

When it comes to how Covid-19 has affected those who are protesting in the United States, there are a lot of ups and downs. Thanks to the protests many people are being brought to justice and laws have been passed to protect the people such as the new law that bans choke holds from being done by police. Even though it might now sound like a lot it’s good to see that we are doing some progress. But since more people have been avoiding social distancing to attend the protest the cases in Covid-19 have been increasing drastically along with the hospitalization rates. It’s hard to imagine that People like George Floyd would have received justice if it wasn’t for the protest.  

 

I understand there are those who don’t come out to protest because they believe that the protest won’t solve anything or will be a waste of time. But, if you’re not willing to stand up for what’s right and fight for it, then you’re not going to get anywhere. It’s important to know that we have the power to change things as long as we stand up together. It’s also important to realize that we can make changes in our own lives by changing how we think and act. This is why I’m so passionate about protesting during a pandemic. It is a great way to show people that we care about them and their well being.

 

In conclusion, protest should continue to go on despite the Covid-19 pandemic. It is important that we all take a stand and fight for what we believe in. It is also important that we all have a voice and be heard and not just ignored. I think that this is an important issue because it shows how much people care about their rights and how they are being treated.

7 thoughts on “Aldo Essay 2 Draft”

  1. Thesis- Change is strongly needed and people should be able to protest during a pandemic.
    One supporting reason- George Floyd is one of the reasons why people should be able to go protest to make things right and see a change.
    Counter claim- There are people who believe protesting won’t make a change but if we stand together as a team we might be able to.

  2. Thesis :people should still have the right to protest during covid.

    Supporting argument:thanks to people protest we have been receiving justice.

    Counter argument:I’m not clear on the counter argument ,but I think one could be that People might say we still have not recovered justice after all the protesting

  3. Thesis: people may state they will fight for our benefits notwithstanding.

    Supporting reason: George Floyd is one reason why individuals ought to have the option to go dissent to make things right and see a change.

    Counter argument: There are individuals who think fighting won’t roll out an improvement however in the event that we stand all together we may have the option to.

  4. 1) Thesis- during this pandemic, people should still be able to protest.
    2) Supporting reasons- “Not only have we been dealing with the police but also racist groups such as the KKK and those who wave around the confederate flag. This is a problem because it is very hard to get rid of these groups, especially when the government is ignoring how hateful there are towards the black community. ”
    3)Counter argument – I see why you’re genuinely standing with why people should protest, but I dont see what’s the counter argument . Can you put that in your writing ? I think it should talk about why protesting wouldn’t make anything that’s happening a difference.

  5. Thesis: regardless f the pandemic people should still have their right to protest

    supporting reason: “protest should continue to go on despite the Covid-19 pandemic. It is important that we all take a stand and fight for what we believe in.”

    counter argument: not really clear but from what i read i feel that it is that they are many people who opposes the protest during the pandemic but it also was at the perfect moment for voices to be heard .

  6. 1-people have a right to protest and speak their mind nothing should stop anyone from speaking out
    2-protest should go on and people should go out and put their first amendment right the the test.
    3-some people see it as waste of time and some people see it as putting your health on the line.

  7. Thesis: people should not be stopped protesting in this pandemic, if we need change we have to raise our voices.

    Supporting reason: Black community is going through this racial experiences in past years, George Floyd’s death is front of us, this is the time where we can bring change.

    Counter argument: people are not going to protest because they think nothing going to change.
    I think this is not strong counter argument, you should work on it.

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