COMD 2313 Illustration 1, SP2017
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Klever nice work!
This looks really good. I think it would be stronger if you cropped a little closer in on the most important part of the image, the epic fight scene! All that background feels extra.
Also lets make sure the 2 characters (phone companies?) are clear… I see you are incorporating logo into character… make sure that reads well.
Regarding value – you need to combine 2 and 3 I think… but right now the values feel very arbitrary. They aren’t guiding the viewer, though the last one has some nice contrast. READ the post on VALUE and Perspective I just uploaded to RESOURCES. see if that helps.