Here is a paper by a student from last semester who also did this assignment. This was his first submission of this assignment. He was kind enough to share it with the class, so that they and he could learn how to improve:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LjLArV8wcT_ZEZzlKj4Q4GGB6y8zVrPVMXOwFOVvlf0/edit?usp=sharing

Please don’t share it with anyone.

Assess it. Say what praise you would give it — what does it do well? Say what corrections you would make — especially, what PATTERNS of errors do you see him making?

And finally: what grade would YOU give it, and why?