A Metaphor?

What do the indications of setting (time/place) do for your experience of reading Saed’s poem, “What the Scar Revealed”?

Reading, what the scar revealed by Saed was interesting. knowing the setting of the poem made it easier to understand. The indication of where and when this took place brought attention to a lot of the details. It feels like the details could almost have been metaphorical, to what was happening in that country at the time that this poem was written.  When I think Afghanistan in 1977 it reminds me of war. ” Young mother sees spirits walking across the sky with stars, blossoming at each step”.  This is in a way reflecting, the spirits of children, women, and men( especially) soldiers in Afghanistan. The stars joining as a single thread of daylight would represent a better day.

Wounds –  these wounds in comparison to a navel would Intrigue you to think. In this country in this time wounds would have been inflicted due to chaos and war. “To heal, the cut navel swallows the city and remembers its fragrance”. its almost like saying, “you live to tell the story”. This is in memory of  the wounds gained in Afghanistan, and someone able to tell the story of healing.

The setting helps to bring life to the story being told in this poem What The Scar Revealed by Zohra Saed. Knowing the setting is a huge help in visualizing. being aware of the place and time gives an understanding to the story. You actually had the opportunity to not only move through the times with the characters but enables you to put yourself in their shoes.

overall though it seems that knowing the setting helps you to understand the details, I am still stuck wondering

Are the details in this poem metaphorical or are they concrete?

 

 

My mom and Me

I may look too young to remember.This park was in the back of Tompkins Projects in Brooklyn. I lived there for a short time in my life, maybe between the ages of two and four. Back in the 1980’s floral print was the “in”. Apparently it was the norm for mom and her daughter to dress alike. Looking at myself makes me realize that times have obviously developed. I searched the back of the picture for a dare and there wasn’t one. That must have been one day in the spring when my mom picked me up from daycare. I think it was spring, and not summer. The sun was shining bright, and i didn’t have a jacket on, neither did my mom. The bright colors and trees already blossomed makes me know that this was spring.

I don’t think I was ever really entertained a this playground. It actually does not look that there was much to be entertained by. I was entertained at school playing with my classmates, learning my alphabet and running a muck. This orange bench i’m sitting on, which I think was some sort of object used for climbing, became a prop for photography. That was all the better for me, I was never really a climber anyway. Back to these floral prints and suspenders, in this playground that seemed more like a social court. With the lack of playground development and the fact that young ladies and little girls had oughta have shoes with buckles, is mostly the reason our fun was all in enjoying the sun, and taking pictures to remember this time, that would explain the huge smile on my moms face . People just seemed happier then. The fact that no one was in the picture but my mom and I,  is pretty relevant since I was an only child. Nothing in the background but plant life and free air. I think I had a piece of mind when my eyes closed due to the lighting of the camera, and woke up to the sun after the flash .

The 80's

The 80’s

My Cover

Roses are beautiful life!

Roses are beautiful life!

Part 2

I  chose to create this cover because it reminds me of the story of Esther Greenwood in The Bell Jar. The rose is red and fiery which represents the inner Esther. Flowers are life , without the proper care a rose will die. The background is scenic, but camouflaged through the off white petals. That scene represents the beautiful death that Esther imagines as she is trapped inside this bell jar. The beautiful rose is suffocating, as Esther Greenwood in The Bell Jar.

One and Fifty (The Bell Jar a Covers)

Then and Now

Then and Now

The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath has many themes. The themes for this novel were expressed in the novel through words as well as through the illustrations on the cover. The Bell Jar has had many covers since it’s first official publication.

The Bell Jar, first Heinemann edition, was published on January 14, 1963 under WillIam Heinemann Ltd. . This Novel was published under the pseudonym Victoria Lucas. Sylvia Plath used this fictitious name in an attempt to avoid hurting the people she cared for in America. Sylvia Plath actually requested that The Bell Jar never be published in America. Sylvia Plath died , said from suicide, shortly after the release of this novel. Hughes gave permission to have her name revealed. Sylvia Plath attempted to publish her novel before William Heinemann Ltd. . The Bell Jar was rejected by Eugene F. Saxton fellowship , affiliated with Harper and Row. They were said to be disappointed in the manuscript. The novel which first names were “Diary Of A Suicide” and “The Girl in The Mirror”.  This novel was said to be juvenile and overwrought by Eugene F. Saxton fellowship. Though rejected in the past by Harper and Row, Heinemann Ltd. Saw something special in this novel.

A bell jar is a bell shaped usually glass vessel designed to cover objects or to contain gases or a vacuum.(www.https//:merriamwebster/belljar)The cover of the first published novel of The Bell Jar has interesting artwork of a woman sitting in a chair, inside of a bell jar. This to me is symbolic to one or more of  the themes in the novel.

One theme that comes to mind in comparison of the illustration on the cover of the first  published edition of The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath is  suppression. The fact that this woman on the cover of the novel is closed inside of a bell jar is metaphorical to Esther being trapped inside the world that she lives in. Esther was unlike any of the other girls that she stayed in the all girls hotel with in New York. More times than not she would suppress her thoughts and true feelings in fear of judgement from others.

Another theme that comes to mind when analyzing the cover of  the first publication of the novel is death. This death would be through suffocation. It is all symbolic to the death of the person who appeared to be Esther and the person Ms.Greenwood really was. “Death must be so beautiful . To lie in the soft brown earth, with the grasses waving above one’s head, and listen to silence. To have no yesterday, and no tomorrow. To forget time, to forgive life, to be at peace. ” Life and all that it involved, to Esther seemed to be suffocating  and the thought of death would be more peaceful.

The woman inside the bell jar on the cover of the first publication has body language displaying stress and grief, being suppressed, and suffocating inside a glass jar. The illustration of the cover depicts this moment in the story by displaying such disgust with life that she feels that whatever death had to offer must be beautiful. Esther Greenwood wold bet that death was better than life. This cover was just the beginning of the many covers to follow.

In 2013 the 50th Anniversary edition of The Bell Jar was published. This edition was done  by Faber and Faber. This illustration of The 50th anniversary edition was criticized by many of the readers and followers of Sylvia Plath’s poetry. This cover was said to glorify the story of depression and suicide that was initially being told by Sylvia Plath. Critics say that this cover will attract only a female group of readers due to the bias art on the cover. Many of Ms.Plath’s readers suggest that Sylvia Plath would herself be unsatisfied with this new cover published by Faber and Faber.

This cover has a picture of a woman looking into the mirror of a compact makeup palette. This woman looks suspenseful, and is applying bright red lipstick . The background is also in a bright red color. Though the red color will bring attention to the book itself , the illustration may stray some readers away. True Sylvia Plath followers understand what’s conveyed in the book as opposed to what is on the cover.

Faber and Faber stands behind the publication of the 50th Anniversary Edition . Faber and Faber’s intention was to keep backlist novels like ” The Bell Jar” in the hands of new readers. They believed that the new packaging of the novel was to draw new readers to old writing.

The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath has many themes. Amongst these themes would be depression, suicide, suppression, and death. Freedom, liberation, and women’s independence are rarely discussed in reference to “The Bell Jar”. Though Esther Greenwood lived in a time of oppression mentally, her conscious was aware. It seemed that her depression may have originated subconsciously as a result of her upbringing, and mentality. Had Esther not held this stigma of mental Illness her aspirations may have reached their full potential.

In the 1950’s Esther interned at a magazine in New York. While Interning Esther stayed at a hotel called the Amazon. She had initially rejected those women who lived at the all women’s hotel . That rejection was in fear of rejection from these well to do women. Esther  felt that she was different.  Though thoughts of freedom to be liberated exist the pressure of being who everyone else would expect was over baring.

Esther Greenwood did not like the idea of being overpowered or protected In a world where she was expected to do just that. “To the person in the bell jar, blank and stopped as a dead baby, the world itself is a bad dream”. Her liberation was thought, but never enacted. Esther had been held so long to the preservation of being protected and thought for, she feared the security of a man. “That’s one of the reasons I never wanted to get married. The last thing I wanted was infinite security and to be the place an arrow shoots off from. I want change and excitement and to shoot off from a Fourth of July rocket”.

Red is a noun, one of its meanings are , emotionally charged terms used to refer to extreme radicals or revolutionaries(dictionaryapp). Not only is the cover of the new 50th Anniversary edition of The Bell jar red, but the woman on the front is applying bright red lipstick as well. The cover of this new edition seems to be a bit misleading. You will get a different idea from the cover then the actual story being told. Women were actually assumed to be domestic beings, and in accordance with the prospect of being what society thought them to be.

The new cover for The Bell jar has a conspicuous suspiciousness. The first cover of the Bell Jar published in the UK in 1963 had a more apparent look. When you looked at the image of this woman being stuck inside of a bell jar like an ornament, you get the sense that she is suppressed. I understand the controversy and ambivalence about the new cover for The Bell Jar.

The new cover states excitement, mischief and mystery. The fact of the matter is that The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath is a manuscript about a woman who is depressed and trying to fight the demons of suicide. Esther Greenwood was dreaming of freedom and liberation, while suffocating in that glass jar from oppression. The new cover makes The Bell Jar appear to be a new and different story.

There is a big difference in the cover of the first published edition of The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath, published under the name Sylvia Lucas in comparison to the 50th Anniversary cover published in 2013 by Faber and Faber. The first cover tells the  story , the most recent cover is deceptive. Overall throughout all of the controversy and the changing covers of The Bell Jar by Sylvia Plath, the story of “Esther Greenwood” remains the same. The different covers just represent the perceptions of novel “The Bell Jar”.

www.wikipedia.com/sylvia plath/thebelljar

www. Fabero.co.uk/about/press/bell-jar

 

 

 

 

Suicide

In chapter 13 of The Bell Jar Esther tries to kill herself after an interaction with Cal. Cal was the boy who Jody had wanted her to meet. They discussed for a while suicide with a shotgun, and things of that nature. the next morning Esther tried to kill herself with a silk cord of her mothers. Though Esther was mentally Ill, she would decide to use whatever sense she had in order to decrease her chances of being out into a mental institution.

Suicide is associated with many things, from peer pressure to mood disorders. In the past 45 years rates of suicide have increased by at least 60% in some countries. This has been the leading cause if death among ages 15 – 34 throughout the world. Attempted Suicide is considered a strategic action to resolve conflict within themselves, parents or peers. This is also considered to be a distress signal, aiming for the empathy, of others. Mental Health and suicide go hand and hand. Of 15, 629 cases of suicide with information on psychiatric diagnoses was over 50 percent.  Disorders such as depression, which is a mood disorder, also associated with suicide had numbers of 35.8 percent of reported suicide deaths.

“That morning , I had tried to hang myself. I had taken the silk cord of my mothers yellow bathrobe As soon as she left for work, and in the Amber shade of the bedroom, fashioned it into a knit that slipped up and down on itself. It took me a long time to do this, because I was poor at knits and had no idea how to make one” this is just an example of how much concentration you have to put into killing yourself. There has to be some reasoning fir this type of dysfunctional Irrational behavior. Suicide has been on the rise for years.

 

bjp.rcpsych.org/content /183/5/382.full

Caricature

 

Quicksand / Chapter 18

“It was, too, as she was uncomfortably aware even a trifle ridiculous, and mentally caricatured herself, moving shuttle like from continent to continent. From the prejudiced restrictions of the New World to the easy formality of the old. From the pale calm of Copenhagen to the colorful lure of Harlem.”

 

Caricature- Noun

A representation of a person that is exaggerated for comic effect ( The dictionary app)

I understand this passage better by knowing the meaning of these two words. Helen felt as if she was unimportant. As she traveled back and forth in between continents that void she was looking to fill , could define her entire existence. She seemed to exaggerate the importance of every detail of everything, and now that exaggeration was of herself. In  her mind, she was looked at as a joke in Harlem as well as Denmark, Copenhagen.

 

 

 

Quicksand

” Incited. That was it, the guiding principle of her life in Copenhagen. She was incited to make an  impression. She was incited to inflame attention and admiration. She was dressed for it, subtly schooled for it. And after a while she gave herself up wholly to the fascinating business of being seen, gaped at, desired. “

Helga had been several places before she made it back to Denmark. She was finally now in Copenhagen. Though she was originally from this place she had Vague memories. Helga was influenced by her aunt and convinced that she was to be and dress in a certain fashion. Being in Denmark shaped Helga Cranes personality in various ways. Denmark was unlike Harlem, where race was of great importance, or from Chicago where she had previously been also. In Denmark the men were different, white for that matter. It just seemed that in the beginning of her quest back to Denmark she was looking for a piece of herself that maybe she had never encountered.

In Copenhagen she was aggravated with the impression that was to be made. This impression didn’t seem to be a racial one, like of that everywhere else it seemed, but more of an impression of class. Helga seemed to become more accepting of herself after a few minor changes to her wardrobe. Every place that Helga had been was a contribution to the development of her character, but none similar to Copenhagen. Helga was able to get in touch with her white side, but was actually able in Denmark to be proud of her dark skin.  Being back in Denmark helped, her sense of fashion and gave her the attention that she thought she desired. Turns out that after all of the happiness she had found, and the feeling of acceptance, there was still something about this place that Helga was not satisfied with. Though. Denmark, Copenhagen was, yet another temporary venture it helped Helga to learn things about herself that she never knew.

 

Midterm prep

” Incited. That was it, the guiding principle of her life in Copenhagen. She was incited to make an  impression. She was incited to inflame attention and admiration. She was dressed for it, subtly schooled for it. And after a while she gave herself up wholly to the fascinating business of being seen, gaped and desired. ”

1.Quicksand

2.Nella Larsen

3.In this passage Helga was provoked by the opinion of others in Copenhagen. She was convinced that her expensive clothes would make an impression on others , especially men in Denmark. Helen was provoked to expect attention due to the amount of care she had already begun to receive. Being back in Denmark she had began to notice that she would be praised In some sort and desired, she gave up her original style to take on a style that had been provoked by the people of Copenhagen and the way they treated her.

4.To me this passage helps to represent the inconsistency of Helga. It connects to the bigger picture In this text because it proves as just another one of the escapades on the journey of finding herself. This passage helps me to notice that Helga does not really accept herself besides  what makes her acceptable to others. It is justification that who she is , or was before she came back to Denmark was not something or someone that she was satisfied with. Helga spent a lot of time criticizing herself, and when others did not criticize her, she felt a sense if belonging. I think the bigger picture here is identity.

Fictitious

“Her fictitious nature was of great assistance to her. It is far harder to kill a phantom than a reality. She was always creeping back when I thought I had despatched her. Though I flatter myself that I killed her in the end, the struggle was severe;”

fictitious- adjective

of, relating to, or characteristic of fiction

not true or real

www.meriamwebster.com

I understand that the angel in the room must have not been real. The fact that she (the angel) was more of a conscious being and a thought than a real person made it more difficult to avoid her. Each time that it was attempted by the writer to send the angel off or rid of  the spirit she would just come back. Finally the angel was defeated and killed, though it was a struggle.