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Conclusion

 In conclusion, I did a research about divorce in different cultures in three different genres and find out a lot of new and meaningful information for myself. In my first Annotation Bibliography, I read an article of clinical psychologist and want to point out findings about divorce in Asia countries. For example, thirty years ago divorce was very rare in most Asia countries. However, in recent years, the pattern of marriage and divorce has changed dramatically. Also, I have known five key influences which effects on divorce. In my second Annotation Bibliography, I conducted interview from my husband to know how he feels about divorce in Tajik culture and what he thinks. This interview was very important for me because I gained a lot of knowledge regarding divorce. There are some key findings what I discovered. In the last ten years divorce cases have been dramatically increased in Tajikistan. Moreover, during the interview I figured out three main reasons of divorce between two young people. The first reason is when husband’s relatives are intruding to a married couple. The second reason is arranged marriages and the third reason is when you marry to one of your relative. Actually, I did not know such subtleties about my own culture.  In my third Annotated Bibliography, I watched a YouTube video about divorce in Islam Religion. The main points I want to mention is that Islam Religion permits divorce, and it is very important for Muslim person to divorce in Islamic way.  Furthermore, I learned that woman has rights to divorce from her husband if she wishes to and there are four types of divorce. Surprisingly, I did not know a lot about divorce in Islam. All the information is taken from the credible source and the source is Holy Islam Book “Quran”. The video I watched at YouTube channel gave me a basic and very helpful information about divorce in my Religion itself. I think that this information I need to know in order to protect my right according to my Religion.

The information which I have gained during the research of Annotated Bibliography essay is very valuable for me, because I learned a lot of knew information about different cultures and religion. Also, I think that this research changed my thinking and opinion regarding divorce at all. Lastly, I have learned and discovered a lot of meaningful information which I think will help me in future. This research essay is very significant for me, it helped me to answer my question and deepen into the topic which I chose.

Amira Webbert

ENG 1101

Prof. Scanlan

            This annotated bibliography was very difficult, between the struggle in finding the right source to write about to the struggle in making sure what was needed in the body was applied. The surprises I found while reading and annotating is that the biggest tsunami that ever hit was in Japan at the height of 1,720 feet and there is a possible chance that it can happen again. After reading/annotating, my thinking on tsunamis has not changed but my knowledge of it did. What is important for people to know is when traveling to these hotspots like Japan, make sure you do your research on when the last tsunami hit, calculate the time difference so you won’t be caught in it, make sure your surrounded by high buildings so if anything was to happen and driving to the escape route wasn’t an option, at least you will be high enough to not get sucked in. last but not least, pay attention to the alerts and be aware of your surroundings and change in weather because a tsunami can hit unpredictably. I’m not author or writer but if anyone who is interested in learning more about tsunamis and there nature then anyone could and should know about my findings and I hope it will be worth their while.   

Draft of Conclusion A.B.

This is where students should post the draft of the annotated bibliography conclusion.

Make sure this draft (100-200 words) contains the following:

 

  1. Summary of the project and findings.
  2. Surprises that you found while reading/annotating your sources?
  3. Any changes in your thinking after reading/annotating?
  4. What’s important for people to know about this research and why?
  5. Who should know about your findings?
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