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In conclusion, even though Mars colonization is hard and risky, some people still decided to go there for the future of mankind, that’s very brave. I’m sure the first pack of 100 explorers are aware that they can come back are very little, because they are facing the environment they have never been before, as in the paragraphs that I’ve mention, it takes about 8-10 months for the starship to went from Earth to Mars, that means any problem they have they can only wait until the time supply arrive to fix, until then they can only deal with the problems with they have. Hopefully nothing went wrong when they get there.

In conclusion marijuana legalization nationwide seems like the inevitable outcome for the future. Whether you agree or disagree with the use of the drug you should agree nobody deserves jail time for using it recreationally or possessing it. Holding this against people as a crime is unethical in itself because it seems to be only targeted in minority communities even though it is evenly smoked by all races. This is a tool to hold back people of color and minorities because convictions withholds resources such as loans, educational, housing, etc. Thankfully, in recent news in NYC has been legalized and plans to expunge convictions from citizens is soon record is in the works. Alcohol is no different than marijuana if not worse. Both should be treated the same way and should be used responsibly. Since the drug was discovered it been used for medical purposes to treat illnesses until it was given a bad reputation which was fueled by racism against Mexican immigrants.

This research will help showcase the need to support collegiate athletes to perform better both in their athletic pursuits and academic endeavors. In this respect, it will necessitate showcasing how the research participants from Gomez et al. study were supported to achieve a delicate balance between studies and extra-curricular activities as time management is a critical hurdle for most student-athletes. The Irish universities demonstrated their effort to support the student-athletes, although there were improperly structured frameworks and a lack of collaboration between stakeholders to implement the strategy fully. Accordingly, my research will showcase the need to bridge that gap and paint a positive picture of students’ benefits in sport with a proper support framework.

Conclusion

The idea of the electric car is not new, but the idea started to come true in recent years when Tesla started the production of electric cars. Tesla is the first company who successfully proves that it is possible to use the fully electric car for daily use. The problem nowadays electric cars face is the range of the battery, charging time, and unavailability of charging stations. Tesla has been working on those issues for the past few years and they continuously improve. Nowadays, Tesla cars get a range of 250 to 350 miles depending on models and they are also improving charging time and building new supercharging stations all over the US. The biggest advantage of electric cars is they are environmentally friendly because electric cars have zero emissions.  According to the AAA survey, AAA, 80% of the consumers of electric cars buy an electric car because the electric car is environment friendly. Nowadays, people don’t buy electricity because they are environmentally friendly also because of the performance. Even though luxurious car brands like Mercedes, Porsche, and many more companies are now producing electric cars. Government incentives also help to develop the electric vehicle market. markets. The electric car makers are not only making electric cars they are also trying to set up a driverless driving system. Tesla’s autopilot program allows their cars to drive without any driver but they are not fully successful yet but the driverless riding is not that far. Also, a ride-sharing company like Uber is investing in it. Electric cars are cost-efficient, they need much less maintenance than gasoline cars. Usually, electric cars have only batteries and an electric motor, but the gasoline cars have so much stuff underneath the hood, that stuff like the engine, transmission, and other stuff needs regular maintenance. That needs a lot of money to maintain those gasoline cars but electric cars usually don’t need that kind of maintenance. Another biggest advantage of the electric car is people can charge their car at home, they need not go to any charging station and wait there hours to full charge. I think that there is no alternative to electric cars. Still, the price of the electric car is higher than the gasoline car, I think more government incentives are needed to keep the price of electric cars in the price range of everyone. There is also a need to raise awareness among electric car consumers because people still believe that electric cars are not as safe as gasoline cars.

Throughout this essay, finding evidence was fairly difficult due to my topic, yet it was interesting knowing how the television is much more than it is now; with current technological advances the television is a staple in modern culture. The television’s purpose is beyond exhibiting images and videos for American families.. We depend on TV for entertainment, news, education, culture. The symbiotic nature of television and culture is exemplified in every broadcast, from family sitcoms to serious news reports. Society has greatly benefitted from television because of its constantly evolving lifecycle; enforcing change and spreading knowledge. Leaving one to question where and what is it going to be like in the future.

Throughout my annotated bibliography, I had found many difficulties finding very good quality research on NCAA athletes needing to be paid. This is because a lot of the website I had found had good reason and points supporting my topic but too many writers weren’t reliable or had the accomplishments to authenticate their work and I didn’t want all my paragraphs to have non-reliable writers so finding the writers that both had accomplishments through writing career and also supported my topic with good evidence was really tough. In my annotated bibliography I wanted each body paragraph to correlate or set each other up. For example, the first body paragraph was on how the possibility of paying athletes was really high because they generate billions of dollars which is more than enough to pay the athletes. Then I followed up by attacking everyone counter claim to my topic which is how all athletes should be happy they get a free education to school which is totally wrong because I wanted the readers to know that not everyone has a luxury life to take care of themselves or even there families while in college and paying them would help reinsure some money to help support them and their family financially. Lastly, my last body paragraph was really important because it broke down the life of a college athlete and even threw in a potential average pay for each player. Looking back at all my research, what really surprised me is knowing that athletes practice almost around 40 hours a week which is literally a full-time job and sports are very dangerous so being paid should be essential. I also feel that there isn’t only one part of this paper that I feel is the most important because each of the paragraphs tells something equally important but just in a different way look at how the NCAA not paying the athletes and keeping the money that wouldn’t be there if it wasn’t for the athletes is crazy. The people that should already have a good idea of what I research and maybe already go through it are the athletes that are or had been playing in college and the fans watching at home. In conclusion, changing the way college is run for athletes should be a priority because remember not everyone is going to make millions in the pros only a selected few and the rest are left out.

Throughout my research I’ve done. I learned so much more about my topic, not taking depression as seriously, reading about it made me realize how important it is, and how it has affected so many people worldwide. In today’s world so many teens are falling into depression so easily. I read so much about young teens falling into depression because of school, home problems, relationships, and many more. Our parents not understanding what us kids are going through always affects it negatively. What surprised me while doing my research is how depression is not talked about as much, so many people fall into depression but not many people tend to talk about this topic. It’s very rare. What changed overall is I never knew this topic was so sensitive, at first it didn’t really affect me as much as it does now after reading and learning about it. People should know that depression can be very hard for people, and sometimes telling a person “you’ll get over it, depression is not a big deal, can mentally disturb that person going through that pain. I feel like you don’t know what that person is going through until you feel the same pain, so never judge anyone. Everyone should be aware about this topic, it’s a very sensitive topic that is not talked about a lot, we should really get people to read about how bad depression really is.

Giorgi Goletiani

Professor Sean

In conclusion my research was about racism around the world, this is big problem for many people around the country, it effects so many families in negative way so many of them having problem because of ignorant people in our society. I have read so many articles and about racism and still can’t figure it out why is it so much hate and discrimination in the world. In to my research I had some difficulties with writing annotating articles, stories because of so many ideas with this topic, for many people like I mentioned earlier it is hard to embrace and show also with some of them it’s no problem and won’t even care about it until they get in to same problem.Racism is defined as prejudice, discrimination, or antagonism directed against someone of a different race based on the belief that one’s own race is superior. It is no secret that America has a racist past, with issues like hate crimes, police brutality, and slavery. However, the concern of racism is still apparent in American society and the good people who are here trying to change reality don’t have that much power just because they are minorities and can’t out win the ones with negative views. The research was fantastic to look into many articles with many different authors essays to had something to learned.

Throughout all of the research that I’ve done, I found that college athletes have had to quit the sport in order to find a regular job due to lack the payment. Some athletes drop out of college because of their financial status and the offer that has been given to them to go pro. And that last but not least I found out that some college athletes can’t even afford to pay the medical bills even after health care. While doing this research some things that I found extremely interesting is that I was unaware of the fact that if you are not connected with a healthcare company ambulance has the right to ignore the fact that you’re in pain and leave you to another option of transportation towards the hospital. In this research process, my thinking towards my question had deepened. Athletes not receiving currency It’s not only affecting their everyday lives but it’s also affecting their physical health. Some of these injuries can be a dire emergency if not assessed properly. And even during recovery some of the athletes can’t even afford to get the best help needed to get back on the court or field. I believe the information that I learned is very important because we watch sports every day for entertainment people all around the world love watching highlights of dunks and goals of not only pro teams but college teams as well. And the fact that they are not getting paid seems very unfair. It’s not the best feeling seeing your favorite college basketball player break his leg in an attempt to make a dunk and even after all of that work you put in all the court he still goes home with no money in his pockets for his performance. In terms of audience, I feel that as many people should know about this unfair situation as possible therefore a change can be made. 

In my conclusion my research question was about health problems soldiers have after they are deployment. In my research I found articles of similar topics about my research question. The three articles that I discovered are 1) Mental health problems, use of mental health services, and attrition from military service after returning from deployment to Iraq or Afghanistan. 2) “Army Warrior Care Project (AWCP): Rationale and methods for a longitudinal study of behavioral health care in Army Warrior Transition Units using Military Health System data, FY2008–2015” 3) “Longitudinal Assessment of Mental Health Problems Among Active and Reserve Component Soldiers Returning from the Iraq War”. The main thing I was surprised about was how many soldiers that come back from deployment and could not get the proper help for health care. After reading the articles I changed my thinking because I did not know how many soldiers that do not get treated for their health. This is really important for people to know because soldiers are suffering with health problems and we need to know this so we could give them the proper care that they need. In my opinion everyone should know about these findings because this will show us, we need to do something about this problem.