In the essay âwhere I learn to readâ written by Salvatore Scibona published in The New York, June 13 and 20, 2011, he first draws the reader in by describing what his life was like in school. He explains how frustrating it was for him when he states: âI failed English literature, American literature, Spanish, precalculus, chemistry, physics. Once, in a fit of melancholic vanity, I burned my report card in the sink of the KFC where I worked scraping carbonized grease from the pressure cookers.â That not only explains his frustration but also uses imagery to show how unhappy he was with his performance in school. In the essay, it seems as though he felt stuck with no way out as if his future was already determined.
Salvatore, later on, talks about his way of escape, or as he called it âBack-yard rehabâ which is where he would sit in his back yard and read as a way to escape the real world, despite everything reading made him happy. He stated âAs long as nobody had assigned the book, I could stick with it. I didnât know what I was reading. I didnât really know how to read. Reading messed with my brain in an unaccountable way. It made me happy; or something.â This is then later on shown when he receives a brochure from a girl thatâs brochure was from St.John college and claimed in the school there were no textbooks, no grades or tests. It was a school where you just read and learn through books Which fit him perfectly he was excited. But knew that he couldnât afford it. But he wouldnât let that stop him.Â
After getting into college he was discovering new things, meeting new people, and being able to do something he loved, read books. After entering that college he found his intellectual home, a place that changed him for the better good. A place that seems so far but wasnât impossible to get to.Â
Hi Nathaniel,
To start off I really like the way you organized everything you wanted to explain to the reader in paragraphs. In the first paragraph, I really like how you smoothly transition from telling the reader the source and author, to telling the reader about what the essay is about. I also noticed how when talking about the authorâs backyard rehab you described it as a place he would go to escape reality. And after reading this you could tell exactly where the author found his intellectual home by the way you explain who the high school was one of his lowest moments in life to in college heâs enjoying himself and expresses how he really started to read more because it was something he was always interested in.
Sincerely, Kai Campbell
Nate,
Thanks for this first post. The middle paragraph was well written: detailed and insightful. Keep it up.
-Prof. Scanlan