I enjoyed the read and her use of words. Her diction is most impressive. I enjoyed her being upfront or blunt about how she felt. Gurbaās take on American Dirt by Jeanine Cummins is fitting. Cummins doesnāt come from that background so she canāt really write a book on it. Itās also kind of insane how much money she made from writing said book and others. Cummins even said āI donāt want to write about raceā but did it anyway and received a seven-figure sum for it. Like Gurba, Iām astonished and somewhat irate at this. Ā I do not know much about Mexican culture but learning about other cultures is always mentally stimulating. I like learning about new cultures and to know that death is so interwoven in Mexican culture fascinates me. However, writing a book on something I donāt come from is on a different level of ridiculous. I also feel for Gurba when she writes about her memoir, Mean and her channeling Sophia Castro Torresā ghost. My heart goes out to Sophia Castro Torres as well. The USA is not perfect. Cummins was wrong to paint it as such. I love my country but we are far from perfect.
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Professor: Jessica Penner
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I agree with Jason’s thoughts because he showed what he enjoyed and what stood out to him. I agree that Gurba’s diction was impressive and also interesting as well.
I love how you accept the flaws of the country at the end of your critique, it gives off the idea that you learned something from the work. I also can agree that her calling out cummings is a very important part of her writing. It is somewhat thrilling because in reality it is true and makes you think that she is calling Cummins “American dirt”.
I agree with Jason because Gurbaās work is one of the most blunt articles that I read recently.