Writing the dialogue for my short story was very inciteful as when I was reading it out loud to my group before spring break I realized there was too much of the narrators voice throughout the story. To change this I added characters that can talk to one another and I added the thought process of Rebecca the main focal character of my short story. Overall, adding dialogue enhanced my story tremendously to get the plot going in the readers mind. Seeing how scared Rebecca was throughout the story only makes the story richer.