ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 TuTh
A City Tech OpenLab Course Site
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
Both your website and essay were quite elegant! I enjoyed wandering the site and seeing the different pages and discovering the amenities of your hotel! The essay also was open and honest about how you worked through the assignment, which is the overall goal of this assignment. Well done!
My only suggestion for your website is to change some of the font–use the script for the titles, but use a simple script for the details. It was a bit difficult to read at times. I’d suggest for your essay that you divide each idea up for its own paragraph. I got lost here and there.
Otherwise, bravo! Can’t wait to stay at your hotel!
100 points (out of 100)!