I really enjoyed both your website and your essay! They both showed a side of you that was informative and amazing. I’m so impressed with your care in doing this assignment as a whole. Your website certainly was festive and hit all the points I hoped for. Your essay showed you took the process seriously, and that you were willing to talk to me and your peers to gain insight. Bravo!
My suggestion for your website is to bring even more of your personal experience with dancing into this website–that makes me even more interested in Bollywood!
I really enjoyed both your website and your essay! They both showed a side of you that was informative and amazing. I’m so impressed with your care in doing this assignment as a whole. Your website certainly was festive and hit all the points I hoped for. Your essay showed you took the process seriously, and that you were willing to talk to me and your peers to gain insight. Bravo!
My suggestion for your website is to bring even more of your personal experience with dancing into this website–that makes me even more interested in Bollywood!
100 points (out of 100)!