Your site and your essay really worked well together, because I was able to “see” how you changed your website after deciding to add pictures and use the pictures to balance the design. Well done! I enjoyed seeing and reading your work in general, because I could witness your development as a writer and a creator. This was definitely fulfilling my overall desire for this project!
The suggestion I’d give for the website is that you have a bio for all of the designers (you don’t have one for #4) and that you proofread (there were some i’s where they needed to be I, etc.). I’d also love to see some of your styles as well!
Your site and your essay really worked well together, because I was able to “see” how you changed your website after deciding to add pictures and use the pictures to balance the design. Well done! I enjoyed seeing and reading your work in general, because I could witness your development as a writer and a creator. This was definitely fulfilling my overall desire for this project!
The suggestion I’d give for the website is that you have a bio for all of the designers (you don’t have one for #4) and that you proofread (there were some i’s where they needed to be I, etc.). I’d also love to see some of your styles as well!
100 points (out of 100)!