ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 MW
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Nice work on both the website and essay! I really liked the links about moves and other details I did not know about soccer. I was also glad to read in the essay that you learned more about soccer during the project, which is always a desired result of any assignment.
The essay needs to be structured a bit differently. It’s just a huge paragraph right now, and I got lost in the text more than once. Divide up the main ideas in separate paragraphs, to help the reader along.
100 points (out of 100)!