After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD1, I plan to change the title of my assignment and a better title for one of the parts. I plan to work on grammar and add more details and descriptions to …
Category: Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Ariana Dominguez
After reading Professor Wu’s comments on my FD 1 I plan to correct my grammatical errors and run-on sentences. Meaning I would have to add punctuation in order for my sentence to run smoothly. I also plan to add more …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative- Jacob.b
After reading Professor Wu’s comments on my FD1, I plan on looking over some grammatical errors I have in my writing. I will also plan to add and extend some of my scenes by adding more dialogue. Also plan to …
Final revision ideas ed narrative- Leslie
What I plan to do for the educative narrative draft is to rewrite the whole thing but try to develop more scenes and get my essay’s main idea clear. I know that in my draft it wasn’t clear but this …
Final idea revision ED narrative-Kinga Zimnoch
After studying Professor Wu’s comments i made sure to thoroughly expand my details even more. When finishing up with some writing i read it to my brother and friend. When reading I found my error and i reread it all …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Daniel Volfson
After studying what Professor Wu had comments, I plan to add more details and dialogue and to make it more of a story than just explaining. I plan to also get a tutor to help me.…
Final Revision ideas Ed narrative- Diana Perez
After studying Professor Wu’s comments on my FD 1 I plan to add more to my reelections and make them deeper with details and personal experience. I plan to fix any grammatical errors as well as fixing my sentences in …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative–Hannael F
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to go back and fix my grammar and formatting. This includes using the correct punctuation, using capitalization when necessary and using correct dialogue format. I also need to …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative-Anabel Nunez
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to work on adding more details in my writing. I will try to create more theater of the mind. Also I will work on using less vague wording …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative – Kaiulani Perez
After reading Professor Wu’s comments on my FD1, I plan on fixing the structure of my writing to have a clear and cohesive format. I also plan on breaking up long blocks of text to help the reader follow along …
