After reading Professor Wu’s comments on my FD1, I plan on fixing the structure of my writing to have a clear and cohesive format. I also plan on breaking up long blocks of text to help the reader follow along better. I also want to read through and fix grammatical errors mainly focusing on run on sentences and spell out all the numbers I used. Finally I will take a look at my conclusion and see if there is something missing from my message to the reader.
