After reviewing Professor Wu’s final remarks on my education narrative FD 1, I intend to be more more in depth with my two scenes. I want to be more descriptive and detailed. I also intend to break up lengthy paragraphs. …
Category: Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative — AJ
After studying professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop the two stereotypes she pointed out more. Also, I plan to go into more detail with the two scenes I introduced, the middle school and the …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative – Edwin
After examining Professor Wu’s comments on my Final draft 1, I plan to reorganize my education narrative. I will start by trying to clarify dates and make it more understandable. I will then make it more clear on how I …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative– Bithiah
After reviewing Professor Wu’s final remarks on my education narrative FD 1, I intend to create two more scenes. I want to be more descriptive and detailed. I also intend to break up lengthy paragraphs. I need to improve the …
Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative–Odalys
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to reorganize my story arc. I will begin by shortening the first part of my story and expand more towards the end. I plan on writing more than …
Final Revision Ideas Ed Narrative — Your Name
After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop two more scenes at key points in my story, in P. 4 and P. 6. Also, I plan to break up large blocks of dialogue by …
