After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to reorganize my story arc. I will begin by shortening the first part of my story and expand more towards the end. I plan on writing more than one paragraph on my accomplishments and show my triumph. Given these points, I will narrate my story by using pathos, theater of the mind and use of dialogue. Lastly, I plan on meeting with the tutor Margo to ensure that I meet my revisions.
OK!