Research Journal Entry #1

For some reason, developing a research/essay proposal has always been difficult for me. From knowing what to say, how to say it, and making sure if it’s all relevant to my topic. Unfortunately, I’m still having some difficultly trying to word my information of Government’s involvement of personal privacy digitally today, and by non-digital means Pre-Revolutionary War and how they are similar though the time difference is nearly two and a half centuries. And i sometimes don’t know if it’s better to be more detailed or less at specific points in the proposal. I guess the best thing that has been helping me with my problem of syntax is typing what I think sounds right then revising it right after typing to make sure the sentences all flow together. Like they say, “If it doesn’t work the first time, try and try again.”