Using the provided rubric, what was the grade you left for your fellow classmate out of 12? What grade did you leave for yourself?
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Using the provided rubric, what was the grade you left for your fellow classmate out of 12? What grade did you leave for yourself?
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The grade I left for Juan was 11 out of 12. I gave a 2 for grammar and spelling because there were a few minute mistakes but as the rubric states, it doesn’t distract from the writer’s intention. The grade I left for myself was 11 out of 12. I took a point away from myself for ideas, I feel my ideas could’ve been better organized.
I give Fiona a 12 out of 12 because it checked all the boxes of the rubric
I give myself an 11 out of 12 because the conclusion doesn’t reflect on the intro
The grade I gave to Alonzo was an 11 out of 12. His Intro and conclusions were great and his body paragraphs showed his experiences with education. His experiences were relatable and clear. The only reason I gave him a 2 for grammar was because of minor mistakes but other than that the essay was great.
What grade did you leave for yourself and why?
the grade i left for Tania was a 12/12 i like the way that she delivered the message that the education system is old fashion . also that only a few teachers and professors would really go out their way to help you .the message was pretty straight forward i gave myself a 11/12 i made some grammar mistakes.
The grade I left for Charles is 10 out of 12. His ideas are clear which I give him a 3 but I feel like he could organize it better which is the reason that I give him 2. Also there are some grammar errors but it does not distract the writers ideas. for intro and conclusion I would give him a 3 because it explains whats the paper and conclusion was well written. I would give my self a 11/12 because there are a few mistakes I feel like my intro and conclusion are capture the interest and it reflects a new understanding of the topic.
Cesar Gutierrez Final
Organization= 2/3
Intro and Conclusion= 1/3
Ideas= 2/3
Grammar and Spelling= 2/3
Overall Grade= 7
Overall, Cesar did a good job of getting his point across. His introduction was clear and gave some important background details about his struggles in school and mentions his mom which was important. The only major problem he struggled with was his concluding paragraph. I noticed that he did not summarize his essay but goes on to talk about another event. The advice I would give Ceasar is when you finish your essay, you should make sure you refer back to your intro that way it’s much easier for you to write and concluding paragraph.
My Final
Oganization= 3/3
Intro and conclusion= 2/3
Ideas= 3/3
Grammar and spelling= 2/3
Overall Grade= 10
The grade I gave Jaydan was 11 out of 12 because the intro and conclusion matched without repeating word for word. The ideas that were said were clear and the grammar and spelling seemed fine for me. The most I could say was the organization was unclear for me.
The grade I gave myself is 10 out of 12 because I believe my grammar could be wrong in some places. The organization was fine, when I finished the paragraphs that was the end of that idea and I moved on to the next.
The grade that I gave Daymondray is a 10 out of 12. His intro didn’t seem to have an attention grabber. His organization was very good, he put personal experiences of his life in his writing. He explained his experience in a good manner. I saw a few grammar mistakes too.
I gave myself an 11 out of 12 because I believe my body paragraphs were organized and my grammar was pretty good. Although I feel like my conclusion was a bit repetative but my intro was well put together.
I would give myself a 10/12 because I believe that idea that I expressed could be been more clear and relatable. The point that I expressed could have been more understandable and my intro and conclusion could have been a lot more interesting and clear.
Gonna be a 12 for Alethea. Organization (3) was clean and well structured. Intro and Conclusion (3) thoroughly resembles each others thoughts and doesn’t lose its originality to make it their specific writing. Ideas (3) were near seamless, but in the second body, I felt confused on some ideas they were portraying, but it could just be me being tired so a 3 fits perfectly. Finally, Grammar (3) as it was great on spelling but some sentences I felt could have used that one extra comma, semi colon or just a period to branch off for a different idea. Nothing too serious, so I feel a 3 still fits perfectly All in all, very good work!
For myself, I feel like a 11 because hyping up your own work is good. For organization (2), I started off a bit on a weird note, didn’t want to be too clean to make it look fake or paid for, but also not messy so it looked like a fleshed out revised paper. Still getting the hang of it. For Intro and Conclusion (3) I feel as if I tied in the two to my body paragraphs very smoothly, and it looked great to me when in revisions. Ideas were a 3 as I brought multiple key points to wrap up one main topic. I felt as if I could’ve wrote more in depth but it would be both too time consuming and too much for one to read. Finally, Grammar (3) and spelling I reread so it better be correct. I rechecked for this specific reason. Thanks for coming to my TedTalk.
for my grade for myself, my intro deserves a 2 I think it was a well wrote intro, for the conclusion I deserve a 1, I think it was a bad one and not well wroten, for grammar and organization a deserve a 3 it was well worded, my spelling was good.
for Jason’s final draft I feel for ideas he shows and tells his views on education from a unique point of view which is not learning English as a second language. for that, he deserves a 3. for spelling there were no mistakes I could think of. his intro and conclusion are very good at least better than mine, he introduces the topic to the reader. very well i can ould under stan everything he said. that is a 3. really everything he did was a 3
The grade I give Wyeon is 9/12 points. He made a couple grammatical and spelling errors, and while his points were clear at the end it was a bit unorganized to read. His conclusion also sounds like another point he wants to make and not necessarily a summary or a reflection of his intro.
For my grade I give myself a 11/12, I think it was coherent but I feel like my conclusion could’ve reflected more on my introduction more.
I gave Dariel a grade of 11 out of 12. I feel like he could have worked on his introduction a bit more. I like how he started with a current situation that needs to be solved. I also like how straight to the point he gets. Maybe he could have made a better hook/smoother transition to the body paragraphs. His conclusion ends really well with a statement that can influence the reader. Dariel’s body paragraphs are structured well and I like how he provided evidence. His grammer is alright, I was able to understand were the essay was going. Overall a nice essay with a good structure for ideas.
I gave myself a 11 out of 12 as well, because I could have organized my paragraphs better, and explained the situation with detailed examples.