Author: bmuniz (Page 3 of 11)

My topic is Mental Health, In my script I tried my best to educate the students and the working class, who are more vulnerable, not to ignore their mental health and emotions and work on them on regular basis. I want my audience to be enthusiastic and optimistic even in tough days, and in this way, they will be more focussed and successful. I feel well about my assignment I explained it thoroughly and followed what professors asked for.

“Murray draws on the experiences of many writer to make a compelling argument for careful revising and editing”

I agree with this because as a writer you should provide details to go with your argument and be very precise 

P5 “Such detachment is not easy. Science fiction writer Ray Bradbury supposedly puts each manuscript away for a year to the the day and then rereads it as a stranger. Not many writers have the discipline or the time to do this. We must read when our judgement may be at its worst, when we are close to the euphoric moment of creation.”

This quote honestly stood out to me but it’s simply self explanatory but this just gave me a thrill and motivation to become a better writer, As him rereading it a year later he may find a way of subtracting and adding it to make it a better manuscript for the readers and he’s doing that in a readers point of view

The tone/language i found in my source can be informative but most importantly inspiring, This source is use to make opportunities and develop strategies but for most it’s used to stop violence and help prevent future mistakes. Throughout the the source they do show imagery and text. It’s a small number of pages, It uses imagery and the layout is clean. The audience is for youth and families to set an example that change is possible.

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