• In paragraph 1 Donald M. Murray states that most school students would never look back at there drafts. Where professionals would continuously change what there first drafts looked like.

• In paragraph 3 he states, “To them the words on the page are never finished. Each can be changed and rearranged” meaning that even when finishing a part of your draft, experienced writers would alway be ready to do what ever changes they need to do in there draft. Even if it’s just a draft that they would in prove there drafts.