INTRODUCTION
Hello my name is Kelvin Galvez , I am here to explain to you how my brain thinks. I did this to explain to the many people what is my current thinking like and in what direction is it leading me. In this essay you will read how my current thinking is and how i want it to be.
THINKING AND WRITINGĀ
Well I finally got up its 1 pm Iām tired hungry and more hungry , i wonder what Iām going to eat , probably some mangu con salami , or maybe some Chinese eh I just want food.
1:30 Finally got my mangu š , now to plan what Iām going to do for the rest of the day. I think Iām going to head to my cousin and relax a little.
2:00 I should start working on creating my clothing line , Iāve been working on it for a while now I should come out with it soon.
2:30 Once Iām finished with my fashion marketing major Iām sure to have the knowledge of what I need to no to come out with a good clothing line.
3:15 Ugh Iām hungry againnn need fooodd.
3:45I finally finished all my homework for the week so now I wonāt have to worry about anything for the vacation coming up ,
4:00speaking of that I have to plan places to visit and sights to see.
4:30Happy about this Jewish holiday even though Iām not Jewish and all no school sounds like a break INeed ,
5:00speaking about school I canāt wait to transfer to FIT, Iām working really hard to make sure my grades are good enough to transfer.
5:30 canāt wait to become a professional already make myself alot of money buy cars , houses , clothes. Thatās awesomeness
6:00 but for now I will start working on the short term goals like actually design some clothes and get to start up the company
6:30 Iām boreddd I need to go back to the gym and work out
7:00 giving my self a year to do a full transformation in the gym
7:30 This Sons of anarchy show is just awesomeā¦ canāt put it in any better words
8:00 still watching my show
8:30 okay time for food again , gonna order some Chinese š
9:00 I just Notice I talk alot about food people are gonna read this n think Iām some fat monster
9:30 okay that food gave me the sleepys , I love when that happens
10:00 school tomorrow ughhh okay Iām going to sleep , early bird catches the worm
THINKING VISUALLYĀ
University of Rochester
https://www.flickr.com/photos/128392472@N07/15264880069/
Food
THINKING RHETORICALLY AND REFLECTIVELY
My Current Thinking
By: Kelvin Galvez
Hello, My name is Kelvin Galvez and I am here to explain to you my current thinking. In this Argumentative essay you will be able to understand my current thinking and the different point of views on it. In this essay I will show you how my current thinking is preparing me for the future. By āfutureā I mean 5 minutes from now, 5 days from now, even 5 years from now, You will see that every thought I have has an action and every action I do is to ultimately benefit me In the future. Why I am doing this you ask? Well the only answer is to show people that even the most random things I do is to help me later on such as doing homework at the last minute or eating healthy food for example. I also am doing this to show the readers were my current thinking is leading me in life.With that being said lets take a look on how my current thinking really prepares me for the future
First evidence I found about how my current thinking prepares me for the future is shown on my day of thoughts. I found that it could be about the smallest things but i am constantly thinking about what to do next as shown in my day of thoughts āi wonder what Iām going to eat , probably some mangu con salami , or maybe some Chinese eh I just want food.ā(kelvin169par.2) You could see this thought in one of my photos titled āfoodā(kelvin,āfoodā).You also see here that i am thinking about what to eat, although that day I ate thirty minuets after it still shows how i am thinking about the future and preparing my self for when i really get hungry and actually thinking about what kinds of food should i eat. Another evidence that i saw in my day of thoughts that showed my current thinking prepares me for the future was āspeaking about school I canāt wait to transfer to FIT, Iām working really hard to make sure my grades are good enough to transfer.ā (kelvin169par.2) you also see here that my current thinking is preparing me for the future saying I need to get good grades to transfer , this thought is looking a little bit further into my future than the first thought but ultimately still doing the same thing as the first.
Although I believe my current thinking is preparing me for the future, There are still people that could argue with me and tell me i am wrong. One reason this being is because Ive shown evidence from one day of thoughts. One day of thoughts doesn’t show your current thinking overall. People can also quote from my day of thought and show that not all my thoughts are looking to prepare me for the future such as āHappy about this Jewish holiday even though Iām not Jewish and all no school sounds like a break I Needed.ā(kelvin169par.3) but then again I am here to prove them wrong, although it is true this is just one day of thoughts this day of thoughts is consistently reminding me of goals or what is needed to do for the week. Till those goals or things i need to do isn’t done i am constantly going to be thinking about them and making sure i do whatever is needed for me to do to complete them showing that my overall current thinking is about preparing me for the future. Also even thought that quote for from my day of thoughts doesn’t really show me thinking about the future, it is because that thought of me thinking about the holiday that i was able to plan a mini vacation on that day as shown in my Day of thoughts ,āI finally finished all my homework for the week so now I wonāt have to worry about anything for the vacation coming up.ā (kelvin169par.2) You could also see more evidence of this thought in my photos titled āRochester Universityā(kelvin,āRochester Universityā)
More evidence showing that I am preparing my self for the future is also including in my day of thoughts saying āI should start working on creating my clothing line , Iāve been working on it for a while now I should come out with it soon.ā (kelvin169par.3) Another example like this one would be ācanāt wait to become a professional already make myself alot of money buy cars , houses , clothes. Thatās awesomenessā (kelvin169par.3) This two thoughts are very similar and very different but ultimately comes down to the same outcome. The first thought talks about creating my clothing line , something that could be a short term goal in the near future or could really be long term. The second thought consist me thinking a lot further , talking about buying car , clothing and houses. But these two thoughts are still thinking about the future and preparing my self for that moment , when i do make my clothing line or when i do become a professional.
Still people can argue with this essay and say my current thinking isn’t preparing me for the future. They can argue that my current thinking is all over the place as shown in my day of thoughts , that I talk about my clothing line then i go on talking about the vacation coming up and so on and so forth. Also from my pictures I have a picture titled āfoodā(Kelvin,āfoodā) showing food and a picture title āRochester University (kelvin,Rochester Universityā), that is pretty much all over the place. But although this may be true, there are still technicalities that play a part of that. In the day of thoughts I recording my thinking ever 30 minuets or so. So i didn’t just continued on from my last thought thirty minuets ago I wrote down what i was thinking that moment. Even thought my thinking was all over the place mostly every thought was preparing me for the future. It may not be in an orderly fashion how it could be but it is definitely preparing me for the future.
In conclusion I can argue that my current thinking is preparing me for the future with evidence from my āday of thoughtsā and pictures representing those thoughts. But that doesn’t mean this is the way i want to think. Although i pay a lot of attention to the future and whats coming up which many people want to do, i find myself wanting to think differently. I want some how convert my current thinking from think about the future in general to thinking specifically about what needs to be done now. For example in order to go to FIT you need to make sure you have a 3.5 GPA, I want to be able to just focus on getting the 3.5 GPA and not think about what i am going to do in FIT when i get there. My plan to change my thinking is by focusing on my short term goals intensely. So if my real goal is to get into FIT i will only focus on getting the 3.5 GPA or if my goal is to create a clothing line I will only focus on making designs and different small things that will later create the clothing line. With doing so i should be able to slowly change my current thinking. And still ultimately prepare my self for the future.
Work Cited
Kelvin169 [kelvin galvez]. “Re:Project 1; Thinking in Writing Open Lab. ENG1101 D377 English Composition , FA2014, Sept 24.2014. Web 14 oct.2014
Galvez, Kelvin “Food” Flickr. Sept 24. 2014. Web14 oct.2014
Galvez Kelvin “Rochester University” Flickr. Sept 30.204. Web 14 oct. 2014
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