You had some interesting insights and observed some revealing details. You need to proofread your work before submitting. It was difficult to understand what you wrote at times because of grammatical errors. Please do so for future reports. My specific feedback is embedded in the document posted in the FILES section on OpenLab.
You had some interesting insights and observed some revealing details. You need to proofread your work before submitting. It was difficult to understand what you wrote at times because of grammatical errors. Please do so for future reports. My specific feedback is embedded in the document posted in the FILES section on OpenLab.