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  1. Christopher Swift

    Some terrific detail and observations. Avoid using terms you are unfamiliar with in order to avoid errors in your analysis. In the future, you could provide even deeper, more specific analysis in the same amount of space. Feel free to edit your work to remove extraneous comments that do not respond to the prompts, or rewrite sentences in order to make them more original and compelling. See my comments embedded in the document posted in the FILES area of OpenLab.


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