COMD 2313 Illustration 1, FA2017
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Alana NICE WORK!
A little feedback:
The faces of both boy and shopkeeper look similar. Be sure the boy looks young enough. Also if both wear a hat do something to differentiate.
The proportions on the man are a bitt of. Torso looks long compared to legs.
Boy proportions are a little off too, but its about head to shoulders ration, kids tend to have bigger head to body proportions. Get reference.
OVERALL well done and start thinking about the best scenes to illustrate in your story.