When it comes to the “ingredients” of an educational narrative, oppression is a very frequent ingredient used in these types of stories. For example, in both “The Fourth of July” and “Maybe I could save myself by writing”, the central idea of both was the fact that the main characters were oppressed in their environment, and their environment gave them little to no control over the situation they were faced with. Along with oppression, passion is also a good ingredient that’s often included in articles like “The Fourth of July” and “Maybe I could save myself by writing”. The amount of anger you feel in “The Fourth of July” when Audre Lorde starts talking about the white people is very passionate. By hearing the constant repetition of the word “white” in the final paragraph, you can indicate how exhausted she is with the racism she was receiving in Washington, D.C. Reactions like Audre’s provoke emotion in the reader, which is what readers typically value the most while reading, which is why it would be more than a good idea to insert that ingredient in my own personal education narrative.
In my personal education narrative, I would let my reader know my story instantaneously, so they have an idea of what type of genre they’re stepping into. Although I have multiple stories, I have to make sure I choose which story I speak about wisely because I want to have my reader’s attention the entire time. That part is a lot more crucial than most authors tend to believe. There are also a couple of questions that I would like to get answered as soon as possible, regarding my educational narrative. I wonder how long I have to make it, ideally, I think it should be around the same length as “The Fourth of July” because I never got to a point where I wanted to get my eyes off of the page, completely due to its length. It was brief, but powerful at the same time, which is how I believe an education narrative should be, but I’m unsure, hence my need for assistance on this concern. Is it okay to mention more than one story in my narrative? Can I use the profanity I was called in my stories to evoke feelings in my reader? Hopefully, my questions get answered soon with the development of my narrative.