Communicating with Mind and Soul

Author: Christian Atemis (Page 1 of 2)

Reading LAMOTT_Christian Atemis

3 quotes from the passage:

  1. “It’s not like you don’t have a choice, because you do — you can either type, or kill yourself.”
  2. “The first draft is the down draft — you just get it down. The second draft is the up draft — you fix it up. You try to say what you have to say more accurately. And the third draft is the dental draft, where you check every tooth, to see if it’s loose or cramped or decayed, or even, God help us, healthy.”
  3. “The first draft is the child’s draft, where you let it all pour out and then let it romp all over the place, knowing that no one is going to see it and that you can shape it later”

 

Answer to Question 3:

From what Lamott has been stating I believe she is saying that the first draft is more of a process. This is because she states that the first draft is where you jot down any ideas you want into a piece of paper. Through that you revise your work then check if there are any things you want to add or take out of that work. Through this process you get your product which would be your final draft. Also, it wouldn’t make much sense if it was meant to be a product since what you’re going for in a first draft is for jotting down ideas. Finally, she literally calls her writing a “Shi*** First Drafts.” I would agree with her saying it’s a process because whenever I write up my first drafts, I just write down anything that I have in mind that correlates with what I’m trying to write about. When finishing it I reread my draft and see if there are any corrections I have to make in my draft. Then that is where I get my final product. Which would explain why many of our teachers/professors from before would tell us to write a first draft so then we can later give it any corrections if needed.

Christian Atemis – Emoji Poem

Love can have many takes

It can be fun or

Move in waves that are as heavy as a whale

In turn it will balance itself.

When love is in the bases of money

It can be wasted as fast as a train

Where it can be sweet and short lived.

Some may chicken out of Love

Some may pursue Love

In the end Love is what will make us all happy

So let Love be a representation of a bright light to look forward to

[Christian Atemis]_LIPOGRAM 2

Confined Room

Some individuals are stuck in a confined room. Where one is alone with oneself reflection. Those individuals would like to leave this room to connect with others in this universe. However, fear is what shuns them from interaction. The fear of hatred from others. This is what ceased them and others alike from relations. Nevertheless, fear can come in different variations of itself. Where fear can consist of animals, natural disasters, medical treatment and etc. Even so, we can utilize these fears to assist us and break free from those restraints. No matter the fear one can have, a matter to embrace or to confront is what defines an individual.

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