grammar: run-on sentences
spelling
vocabulary: did we use the right words to capture what we were thinking? did we include it correctly?
better ways to phrase sentences
include more information for each section–elaboration
include the story behind the passion/philosophy/future vision–experience
call attention to repeated information
positive feedback
quotations to support writing, ideas
introductions and conclusions–how to make them more graceful, have a better impact
Telling Brooklyn Stories, Fall 2012:
Effective Speaking
SPE 1330, section 6366
Prof. Justin Davis
M/W 11:30-12:45
Office Hours: T/Th 9:00-11:00
English Composition I
ENG 1101, section 5381
Prof Jody R. Rosen
M/W 1:00-2:15
Office Hours: M 2:15-2:45
W 10:30-11:30, 2:15-2:45
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