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Apaak, Daniel, and Emmanuel Sarpong. Internal Challenges Affecting Academic Performance of Student-Athletes in Ghanaian Public Universities. , 2015, files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ1080130.pdf.

Apaak & Sarpong is empirical research that investigates the internal challenges that affect the student-athletes performance. The study was done in Ghanaian public varsities and was intentioned to illustrate why a typical student’s athlete might face challenges in his or her academic course. Notably, the research cohort employed the descriptive survey research approach and chose 1158 student-athletes from seven public universities in the country as named above. However, the criteria used in selecting the universities are that they must have participated in the 2014 university sports at Cape Coast. Further, by using simple random sampling, 332 respondents were chosen from the seven universities, and a questionnaire was the instrument that the researchers used to gather data for analysis. Mainly, the questionnaire was purposed to obtain information regarding the internal challenges that affect the student’s athletes. 

The research findings established that the student’s athletes face a unique set of challenges than other students who do not get engrossed in sporting activities. Accordingly, they spend significant time training on the sports which may detrimentally affect their studies. Further, it was noted that much time is also spent on traveling, and since some of the athletes have poor time management skills, they miss a lot in their lectures and assignments. Furthermore, some students spent a lot of time thinking about improving their sporting activities. 

These findings will be significantly helpful in preparing my research paper. It will help in debunking how university sports permeates society politically, educationally, psychologically, and more so, financially. Accordingly, it will help showcase how the student-athletes are an image to the universities, although this comes at a high cost since most of them compromise their study time. This study will be a good basis to argue that the student’s athlete compromises their academic performance as they are likely to suffer pregnancy, learning disabilities, substance abuse, identity foreclosure, and mental health disorders. 

Indeed, the research by Apaak & Sarpong is an exposition of the challenges that university student-athletes face while attempting to balance academics and sporting activities. This research will form the basis of my recommendations as it showcases stakeholders’ role in addressing the situation. For instance, it showcases the need for the stakeholders to collaborate in creating a sports schedule that will not disrupt a student’s academic year and offer them sufficient time for study and attain commendable grades.

O’Neill, Maureen, et al. “Student-Athletes in My Classroom: Australian Teachers’ Perspectives of the Problems Faced by Student-Athletes Balancing School and Sport.” Australian Journal of Teacher Education, vol. 42, no. 9, Sept. 2017, pp. 160–78, doi:10.14221/ajte.2017v42n9.10.

O’Neill et al. empirical research give a different view regarding the academic performance of athletes. In this case, it showcases that the student-athletes can perform exceedingly well in their academics with proper support. Notably, O’Neill et al.’s research was based on a large project of highly performing school athletes. The study was based on nineteen research participants, where 12 were females, and 7 were males. The research participants were internationally ranked athletes, although from various sporting activities. Also, ten parents, ten caregivers, and ten teachers got interviewed. To ensure that the research was conducted within the requisite ethical standards, approval got obtained from the ethics committee of institution research. 

The findings obtained from this research showcase that the young athletes missed their lecture time to either train or attended their competitive tournaments, thus adding pressure to catch up with their academics when they resumed school. For instance, one of the research participants averred that the elite athletes experienced trouble maintaining commendable grades since much time was spent in their selection camps. Further, this research demonstrated that the student’s connectedness was adversely affected as they would have challenges with their peer and school relationships. Further, it remained essential to appreciate that the classroom dynamics and the school culture were also negatively affected, hence poor, strong connection with their peers. 

Most importantly, this research was a combination of the problems and some of the most feasible solutions that would address the students’ problem. In this respect, technological aids to enable the student’s keep abreast with the learning process were noted to be helpful. The research identified programs such as Twitter and Skype through which the lecturers uploaded educational materials. The teachers who participated in the research process averred that populating the athlete students’ intranet with educational materials to support them while they traveled away from their respective learning institutions was a helpful strategy. Notably, some institutions furnished the student-athletes with tablets to keep abreast with the academic syllabus and complete their assignments. 

Ultimately, this empirical research will help underpin the various support strategies that the learning institutions could adopt to improve student-athletes’ academic grades. Accordingly, this research will establish a good commencement point to discuss both the issues and some of the strategies that have been adopted to alleviate poor performance by student-athletes. It will also form a good basis for suggesting recommended strategies to the policymakers on the need to offer junior teachers proper training to understand the dynamics of a student who get involved in extracurricular activities.

Grimit, Nicole. “Effects of Student Athletics on Academic Performance.” The Journal of Undergraduate Research, vol. 12, 2014, p. 5, openprairie.sdstate.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1014&context=jur#:~:text=found%20that%20participation%20in%20athletics.

Grimit research sought to determine the effect of the student’s academic performance due to their involvement in sporting activities. Determinatively, it was purposed to evaluate whether the students’ participation in collegiate athletics was either beneficial or disadvantageous. Accordingly, the research instrument used in obtaining data was a sixteen-question survey whereby seventy copies were distributed to South Dakota University students. Consequently, other survey questions were distributed amongst the student-athlete committee members, and twenty-one of them were also distributed amongst the fellowship members of the Christian athletes. Also, another twenty-two survey question was distributed amongst the women and men dive & swim team. There was a time limit given to fill in the survey questions. The first two questions sought to determine the demographic information. The remaining questions focused on answering the research question, which sought to showcase the correlation between students’ performance due to collegiate athletics participation. 

The research findings from Grimmit research were unique because they showcased that the students who participated in extracurricular activities at South Dakota university performed better than their peers. However, it remains critical to note that South Dakota University had hired a cohort of professionals who assist student-athletes. Notably, besides assisting the students in performing better in their sporting activities, the professionals also taught the students about the need to learn life skills and focus on their career paths. The research suggested that involvement in college athletics significantly motivated the students in their academics. Further, it motivated them to attend all their classes and keep tabs on all the learning activities in a quest for better academic performance. Notably, it was also noted that the involvement in the sporting games motivated the athletes to graduate while making their academic experience nostalgic. 

This research will help showcase that involvement in university sports is not entirely disadvantageous per se. However, it necessitates the university stakeholders to be concerned with the student’s welfare by hiring a team of professionals who will guide the students in their sporting endeavors and achieve both their academic and career goals. This empirical research will be a good source of secondary data to justify the need for various stakeholders to mentor the student-athletes and make their college learning a nostalgic experience.

Gomez, J., et al. “The Challenges of a High-Performance Student Athlete.” Irish Educational Studies, vol. 37, no. 3, June 2018, pp. 329–49, doi:10.1080/03323315.2018.1484299.

Gomez et al.’s research aimed to investigate the effect of challenges encountered by students who get involved in high-level sporting activities. It illustrated the need to establish a balance of sports and academic demands. The research participants were part of the 15000 Irish university students. The institution is situated in an Irish town and has various undergraduate and post-graduate programs for the natives and international students. The nine students that participated in this study were of 21-31 years. Notably, two students were involved in the research as mature students. The interview was the main data collection tool. However, a pilot study was done before the actual study to ensure that the methodology that would be used was reliable. 

Gomez et al. showcased that there was a correlation between time constraint and being involved in sporting activities. In this respect, the cohort demonstrated that time management was a critical skill needed by the student-athlete to excel in sports and academics. The researchers compared their findings with Stevens et al.’s findings which resonated with their research results. In this respect, they established that student-athletes were aware that they did not have adequate time to focus on academics or sporting activities. One of the athletes, who was an architecture student, alleged that he had a lot of practicum assessments and needed an intricate balance between training and academics. The research findings further focused on the first-year students who were involved in sports. They registered concerns regarding balancing their athletic pursuits with the academic goals, adaptation to isolation as they had to train, satisfying different relationships with their coaches, friends, teachers, and community. Nevertheless, the athletes who combine their training regimen with their academic studies demonstrate commendable organization skills. 

This research will help showcase the need to support collegiate athletes to perform better both in their athletic pursuits and academic endeavors. In this respect, it will necessitate showcasing how the research participants from Gomez et al. study were supported to achieve a delicate balance between studies and extra-curricular activities as time management is a critical hurdle for most student-athletes. The Irish universities demonstrated their effort to support the student-athletes, although there were improperly structured frameworks and a lack of collaboration between stakeholders to implement the strategy fully. Accordingly, my research will showcase the need to bridge that gap and paint a positive picture of students’ benefits in sport with a proper support framework. 

Works Cited

Apaak, Daniel, and Emmanuel Sarpong. Internal Challenges Affecting Academic Performance of Student-Athletes in Ghanaian Public Universities. , 2015, files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ1080130.pdf.

Gomez, J., et al. “The Challenges of a High-Performance Student Athlete.” Irish Educational Studies, vol. 37, no. 3, June 2018, pp. 329–49, doi:10.1080/03323315.2018.1484299.

Grimit, Nicole. “Effects of Student Athletics on Academic Performance.” The Journal of Undergraduate Research, vol. 12, 2014, p. 5, openprairie.sdstate.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1014&context=jur#:~:text=found%20that%20participation%20in%20athletics.

O’Neill, Maureen, et al. “Student-Athletes in My Classroom: Australian Teachers’ Perspectives of the Problems Faced by Student-Athletes Balancing School and Sport.” Australian Journal of Teacher Education, vol. 42, no. 9, Sept. 2017, pp. 160–78, doi:10.14221/ajte.2017v42n9.10.

This research will help showcase the need to support collegiate athletes to perform better both in their athletic pursuits and academic endeavors. In this respect, it will necessitate showcasing how the research participants from Gomez et al. study were supported to achieve a delicate balance between studies and extra-curricular activities as time management is a critical hurdle for most student-athletes. The Irish universities demonstrated their effort to support the student-athletes, although there were improperly structured frameworks and a lack of collaboration between stakeholders to implement the strategy fully. Accordingly, my research will showcase the need to bridge that gap and paint a positive picture of students’ benefits in sport with a proper support framework.

Time Management

Time management is very essential to everyone. How your time is managed can make or break you schedule. Finishing your tasks early helps when you’re running low on extra time. If the task is finished on time, then the extra time can used for anything. If the task is finished late then, you risk consequences. During the Covid-19 pandemic, students are all taking online classes, this makes students less focus on what they should be doing, whether it’s homework for class or studying for a test. Often phones, computers and other electronic devices are causing students to be distracted. This often caused students grades to drop drastically. The main point of time managements is time awareness and self-control, by meaning, identifying and eliminating the stuff that disrupts your intellectual home.

Personally I have poor time management skills. This often results from my short attention span and wandering thoughts. Even though I struggle with time  management, I make sure to get the most done with what time I do have. Time management skills are good to have. Managing time and work efficiently can make it easier for a person to accomplish plans.

Third Annotation

Grimit, Nicole. “Effects of Student Athletics on Academic Performance.” The Journal of Undergraduate Research, vol. 12, 2014, p. 5, openprairie.sdstate.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1014&context=jur#:~:text=found%20that%20participation%20in%20athletics.

Grimit research sought to determine the effect of the student’s academic performance due to their involvement in sporting activities. Determinatively, it was purposed to evaluate whether the students’ participation in collegiate athletics was either beneficial or disadvantageous. Accordingly, the research instrument used in obtaining data was a sixteen-question survey whereby seventy copies were distributed to South Dakota University students. Consequently, other survey questions were distributed amongst the student-athlete committee members, and twenty-one of them were also distributed amongst the fellowship members of the Christian athletes. Also, another twenty-two survey question was distributed amongst the women and men dive & swim team. There was a time limit given to fill in the survey questions. The first two questions sought to determine the demographic information. The remaining questions focused on answering the research question, which sought to showcase the correlation between students’ performance due to collegiate athletics participation. 

The research findings from Grimmit research were unique because they showcased that the students who participated in extracurricular activities at South Dakota university performed better than their peers. However, it remains critical to note that South Dakota University had hired a cohort of professionals who assist student-athletes. Notably, besides assisting the students in performing better in their sporting activities, the professionals also taught the students about the need to learn life skills and focus on their career paths. The research suggested that involvement in college athletics significantly motivated the students in their academics. Further, it motivated them to attend all their classes and keep tabs on all the learning activities in a quest for better academic performance. Notably, it was also noted that the involvement in the sporting games motivated the athletes to graduate while making their academic experience nostalgic. 

This research will help showcase that involvement in university sports is not entirely disadvantageous per se. However, it necessitates the university stakeholders to be concerned with the student’s welfare by hiring a team of professionals who will guide the students in their sporting endeavors and achieve both their academic and career goals. This empirical research will be a good source of secondary data to justify the need for various stakeholders to mentor the student-athletes and make their college learning a nostalgic experience.

Second Annotation

O’Neill, Maureen, et al. “Student-Athletes in My Classroom: Australian Teachers’ Perspectives of the Problems Faced by Student-Athletes Balancing School and Sport.” Australian Journal of Teacher Education, vol. 42, no. 9, Sept. 2017, pp. 160–78, doi:10.14221/ajte.2017v42n9.10.

O’Neill et al. empirical research give a different view regarding the academic performance of athletes. In this case, it showcases that the student-athletes can perform exceedingly well in their academics with proper support. Notably, O’Neill et al.’s research was based on a large project of highly performing school athletes. The study was based on nineteen research participants, where 12 were females, and 7 were males. The research participants were internationally ranked athletes, although from various sporting activities. Also, ten parents, ten caregivers, and ten teachers got interviewed. To ensure that the research was conducted within the requisite ethical standards, approval got obtained from the ethics committee of institution research. 

The findings obtained from this research showcase that the young athletes missed their lecture time to either train or attended their competitive tournaments, thus adding pressure to catch up with their academics when they resumed school. For instance, one of the research participants averred that the elite athletes experienced trouble maintaining commendable grades since much time was spent in their selection camps. Further, this research demonstrated that the student’s connectedness was adversely affected as they would have challenges with their peer and school relationships. Further, it remained essential to appreciate that the classroom dynamics and the school culture were also negatively affected, hence poor, strong connection with their peers. 

Most importantly, this research was a combination of the problems and some of the most feasible solutions that would address the students’ problem. In this respect, technological aids to enable the student’s keep abreast with the learning process were noted to be helpful. The research identified programs such as Twitter and Skype through which the lecturers uploaded educational materials. The teachers who participated in the research process averred that populating the athlete students’ intranet with educational materials to support them while they traveled away from their respective learning institutions was a helpful strategy. Notably, some institutions furnished the student-athletes with tablets to keep abreast with the academic syllabus and complete their assignments. 

Ultimately, this empirical research will help underpin the various support strategies that the learning institutions could adopt to improve student-athletes’ academic grades. Accordingly, this research will establish a good commencement point to discuss both the issues and some of the strategies that have been adopted to alleviate poor performance by student-athletes. It will also form a good basis for suggesting recommended strategies to the policymakers on the need to offer junior teachers proper training to understand the dynamics of a student who get involved in extracurricular activities.

First Annotation

Apaak, Daniel, and Emmanuel Sarpong. Internal Challenges Affecting Academic Performance of Student-Athletes in Ghanaian Public Universities. , 2015, files.eric.ed.gov/fulltext/EJ1080130.pdf.

Apaak & Sarpong is empirical research that investigates the internal challenges that affect the student-athletes performance. The study was done in Ghanaian public varsities and was intentioned to illustrate why a typical student’s athlete might face challenges in his or her academic course. Notably, the research cohort employed the descriptive survey research approach and chose 1158 student-athletes from seven public universities in the country as named above. However, the criteria used in selecting the universities are that they must have participated in the 2014 university sports at Cape Coast. Further, by using simple random sampling, 332 respondents were chosen from the seven universities, and a questionnaire was the instrument that the researchers used to gather data for analysis. Mainly, the questionnaire was purposed to obtain information regarding the internal challenges that affect the student’s athletes. 

The research findings established that the student’s athletes face a unique set of challenges than other students who do not get engrossed in sporting activities. Accordingly, they spend significant time training on the sports which may detrimentally affect their studies. Further, it was noted that much time is also spent on traveling, and since some of the athletes have poor time management skills, they miss a lot in their lectures and assignments. Furthermore, some students spent a lot of time thinking about improving their sporting activities. 

These findings will be significantly helpful in preparing my research paper. It will help in debunking how university sports permeates society politically, educationally, psychologically, and more so, financially. Accordingly, it will help showcase how the student-athletes are an image to the universities, although this comes at a high cost since most of them compromise their study time. This study will be a good basis to argue that the student’s athlete compromises their academic performance as they are likely to suffer pregnancy, learning disabilities, substance abuse, identity foreclosure, and mental health disorders. 

Indeed, the research by Apaak & Sarpong is an exposition of the challenges that university student-athletes face while attempting to balance academics and sporting activities. This research will form the basis of my recommendations as it showcases stakeholders’ role in addressing the situation. For instance, it showcases the need for the stakeholders to collaborate in creating a sports schedule that will not disrupt a student’s academic year and offer them sufficient time for study and attain commendable grades.

Traditional Research

In today’s society, the internet has made research more complex to conduct research. The internet gives us access to billions of information at our fingertips. Before the internet, the process of conducting research is long and very intensive. Students would have to locate information using their local or school library.

 In the past, researchers would go to the library to gather information on a subject. This process would often consist of communicating with a librarian, finding the card catalog, writing down serial numbers, walking up several flights of stairs to locate the particular source.

When we research a topic on the internet, there are billions of information at your disposal. The stock of knowledge is so wide that you have to analyze the information appropriately, and use your creativity to summarize, annotate, and interpret the information given. 

Wikipedia Research

Research is the creative and systematic work used to increase knowledge. The scientific study of research practices is known as meta-research. Meta science is the study of science. Also known as  “Research on research”. There are several forms of research: scientific, documentary, artistic, historical, etc.

Scientific research is a systematic way of gathering data and harnessing curiosity. This form of research provides scientific information and theories for the questions about nature and the properties of the world. Scientific research is a widely used standard for judging an academic institution. “Documentary research is the use of outside sources, documents, to support the viewpoint or argument of an academic work.” The process of document research involves forming an idea, using and analyzing documents.

The historical method consist of techniques and guidelines which historians use historical sources and other evidence to research and then to write history. There are many history guidelines that are commonly used by historians, under the headings of external criticism, internal criticism, and synthesis. This includes lower criticism and sensual criticism.

Derrick Felder

Prof. Sean Scanlan

English 1101

Draft: Essay 1

Intellectual Home

Reading hasn’t just opened my eyes to the unknowns of the world, it has also helped me expand my vocabulary to be able to express myself in a better, more efficient way. I chose Malcolm X’s “Learning to Read” as my essay; while also admiring Sherman Alexie’s point of view in his article “Superman and Me”. While Malcolm X’s Intelectual home is centered around him learning to read in prison and his process of reading comprehension, my own intelectual is centered around the tone of the environment and the process of writing. In this essay I will first explore my own intellectual home, detail what makes up my intellectual home, and my future intellectual home. Second, I will explore Malcolm X’s intellectual home and his process of reading. Lastly, I will compare the similarities and differences in Malcolm’s process of reading with my process of writing.

My ideal intellectual home takes place on my rooftop with the light sounds of fast cars passing with a bright sun and slight breeze upon my face. Normally you’d think the fast cars and pedestrians passing by would create a lot of distractions, but that’s not the case. I use these noises as anchors for my mind when it tends to wonder. Sometimes when I don’t have that option to use the roof, I sit in my bathroom, turn on my led lights, turn on jazz music, and write. I’ve noticed I get some of my best work done while sitting on the toilet. I actually wrote the first five paragraphs of this essay on my toilet. An intellectual home is a place, a person, or activity that helps you do your best work. So technically my intellectual home is in my bathroom.

My future intellectual home, I imagine it would be in a big room with a giant window for sunlight to burst through. There would be jazz playing in the background, a big U-desk, comfortable rolling chair, and a sofa for when I want to get comfortable while working. This Intellectual Home I’ve described is the perfect setting for me to study and write more efficiently. Setting the right mood helps with my process of writing. I turn on slow background music and lower my lights just enough to see what I’m reading. The tranquility allows me to ease my mind, relax and get the creative juices flowing. When I get into my intellectual home, I could write for hours and it would only feel like minutes.

An intellectual home doesn’t have to be in a room, or has to be a quiet place. It can be in a park, with kids playing on the playground. Not everybody has access to a quiet space or a park. Some have to make an intellectual home out of what they have. After being convicted of robbery in 1946, Malcom X spent several years in prison. While Malcolm was incarcerated, he found his intellectual home reading and writing the dictionary word for word in his notepad. Malcolm’s process of learning is copying the words from the dictionary to his tablet and reading them aloud.  “In my slow, painstaking, ragged handwriting, I copied into my tablet everything printed on that first page, down to the punctuation marks. I believe it took me a day. Then, aloud, I read back, to myself, everything I’d written on the tablet. Over and over, aloud, to myself, I read my own handwriting.” Malcolm was heavily influenced by Elijah Muhammad. Malcolm would often write to Elijah and would have trouble articulating what he wanted to say. That is one of the reasons he chose to improve his reading comprehension and writing skills. 

Meaningful Personal Experience

Twelve o’clock is what the clock says as I’m walking my mom down the aisle. After 21 years i’d never thought i’d be the one to walk my mother down the aisle. I’m so nervous, I feel like I’m sweating through my suit. I look at my mother and she looks so beautiful. I’ve never been so happy for my mother. Growing up it was always just me, my little sister, and my mother. I’d never thought that there would be a day that we would welcome another person into our lives. But that day was here. That day a man stood at the altar waiting for me to give my mother away to him. Some part of me wanted to grab my mother and sister and just run away. I didn’t want to give away my mother. I didn’t even like sharing her with my little sister. But i couldn’t think like that. Today was my mother day. This is the day she has been waiting on for 47 years and I wasn’t gonna be the one to ruin it. I make it to the altar and give my mother a kiss. I whisper in her ear “I love you mommy”. Her soon to be husband then takes her from me and I go sit down in my seat. On the way to my seat it took everything in me not to cry. The day was just so beautiful it felt like nothing could ruin it. Watching my mother that day might have been the most beautiful thing I’ve seen. Not many know they dated once upon a time. And their relationship was serious. That man at the altar was my little sister’s biological father. They’ve been in love for over 18 years. Unfortunately they weren’t able to be together for those years. After 18 years the love my mother had for him never faded. After everything they’ve been through, they deserved to get married. And they finally got what they deserve. This is a meaningful personal experience to me because not many people in my family are married or getting married. Especially at 47 years old. That day instilled in my heart that love lasts if it’s real.

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