ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 TuTh
A City Tech OpenLab Course Site
The OpenLab is an open-source, digital platform designed to support teaching and learning at City Tech (New York City College of Technology), and to promote student and faculty engagement in the intellectual and social life of the college community.
I really enjoyed both your website and the process essay. Both showed your personality very clearly, and were framed that made me (a non-gamer) interested in the topic! Bravo!
My suggestion for the website is that you position the text into bullet points to make reading the information easier. Also, you don’t have a works cited page or a page about the audience you’re intending this website for. For the process essay, I’d like to know what is it about criticism you dislike? Is it past experience? I’d be interested in that.
100 points (out of 100)!