ENG1121 English Composition 2, SP2020 TuTh
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Your website was very educational–I finally understand the positions soccer players play with that one graphic–woohoo! I also love the picture with the man hugging the trophy. Nice! I also liked reading in the essay how you felt much more positive about writing at the end of the project, because you felt you were really contributing something rather than just writing for homework.
I think hearing some things would’ve enhanced this website more, so I’d suggest that for a revision. I also think you could also play with the text more–spread it out so that the reader doesn’t get so lost in all the words.
100 points (out of 100)!