I hadn’t heard of FIRST before, so this website did a good job of introducing the different sides of the program. I enjoyed watching the videos–they gave me a personal perspective, which is always a good thing. That said, I’m glad when you mentioned in your essay that you cut some of the videos. I felt the videos are good to season a website, but too many would’ve been overwhelming. Bravo overall!
I’d suggest working on more graphics in the website–some of the text took over a lot of space. Keep the text, of course, but spread it out over more pages.
I hadn’t heard of FIRST before, so this website did a good job of introducing the different sides of the program. I enjoyed watching the videos–they gave me a personal perspective, which is always a good thing. That said, I’m glad when you mentioned in your essay that you cut some of the videos. I felt the videos are good to season a website, but too many would’ve been overwhelming. Bravo overall!
I’d suggest working on more graphics in the website–some of the text took over a lot of space. Keep the text, of course, but spread it out over more pages.
100 points (out of 100)!