Great work on both the website and the essay! I liked the game and the video–those spiced up the topic, and both worked well with the text you chose to showcase. I felt you had a good “tone” throughout the website that really wanted to teach, and bring the visitor into the topic. I also enjoyed reading about your struggles and successes with this project, and how you adapted throughout the good and not-so-helpful peer reviews.
I think you could’ve used a few more graphics in your website. There were some pages that were all text and no visuals to bring a learner closer to understanding.
Great work on both the website and the essay! I liked the game and the video–those spiced up the topic, and both worked well with the text you chose to showcase. I felt you had a good “tone” throughout the website that really wanted to teach, and bring the visitor into the topic. I also enjoyed reading about your struggles and successes with this project, and how you adapted throughout the good and not-so-helpful peer reviews.
I think you could’ve used a few more graphics in your website. There were some pages that were all text and no visuals to bring a learner closer to understanding.
100 points (out of 100)!