I loved the bios and the societal impact of each of the rappers you presented–I felt that showed the true nature of the genre, and giving the personal stories made me more curious about the artists and their work. Bravo! I also enjoyed how honest you were in the essay–it helped me see the website in a different way as well, because I could see the thought process that was behind the site. Nice!
I’m curious about some of the facts (that I’d rec you double-check) given in the background of rap, etc. Are they research-based or personal experience-based? Also, a few more visuals on some of the pages would be helpful. Work on the overall design of the website (as you mention at the end of the essay).
I loved the bios and the societal impact of each of the rappers you presented–I felt that showed the true nature of the genre, and giving the personal stories made me more curious about the artists and their work. Bravo! I also enjoyed how honest you were in the essay–it helped me see the website in a different way as well, because I could see the thought process that was behind the site. Nice!
I’m curious about some of the facts (that I’d rec you double-check) given in the background of rap, etc. Are they research-based or personal experience-based? Also, a few more visuals on some of the pages would be helpful. Work on the overall design of the website (as you mention at the end of the essay).
100 points (out of 100)!