My mom and dad only talk spanish at home so we would speak spanish only because they couldn’t understanf english. At school i would speak english only so for me learning two languages at the same time was very diffcult for me. Sometimes i couldn’y translate a word in spainsh so i would get stress and mad at myself because my parents couldn’t understand what i was trying to say. In school they put me in a spanish so that really help me out a lot and i started to see a progress with me learinng two different languages at the same time. My parents always wanted me to learn two languages because they told me its good for me and it will help a lot. at first i wouldn’t like speaking spanish or learning it because i would had hard times but then i started realzing that it helped me a lot.
I really felt like i was living in two different worlds where one was with my family speaking spanish and there was the other one where in school i would just speak english with my friends. but like i said school put me in a spanish class where my teacher and my classmates would just speak spanish. My parents really like the idea of me taking spanish classes because it would help me improve my spanish. in class started to feel better because i would speaks spainsh and then when we had regular class i would speak english so i started to feel better. learning two languagues give me more acces to socalize with people because i would speak two differnet languages.
I also experienced the same. I always struggled understanding 2 languages at the same time throughout elementary and middle school.
There are many writing errors here! Capitals, Sentence Errors (RO, CS, FRAG) please work with a tutor and please do the handout exercises that were given out in class Wednesday. You can also look at the Grammar Writing Skills Page.
Your two paragraphs repeat a lot of the same ideas.
Notice that you are doing a lot of telling. Can you find aplace to create a scene? Add some CSD concrete specific details?
Can you SHOW me that “learning two languages at the same time was difficult”? Reach back into your memory for a time when you felt lost speaking two different languages at school. WHEN was this? WHAT grade were you in? THINK the 5 Ws.