Final Revisions Ideas Ed Narrative–Hannael F

After studying Professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to go back and fix my grammar and formatting. This includes using the correct punctuation, using capitalization when necessary and using correct dialogue format. I also need to elaborate more on certain ideas that I talk about. This means adding more details to help my readers have a better understanding of what I’m trying to convey. I also would like to make more connections. 

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