Research question: How is the health of fighters at risk in combat sports, and what measures are being implemented to protect their well-being both during and after competition.
The message I want to teach my audience is that fighters put …
Category: Student Work
Mentor Text Analysis- Stacey M
Bloodborne A World without Hope by Shinigamieater
A World Without Hope by Shinigamieater hooks the audience by creating a mood of intrest and despair through vivid descriptions in the introduction. The research incorporates philosophical ideas and game tales into its …
Mentor Text Analysis – Einstein Leung
https://www.washingtonpost.com/opinions/2020/04/01/andrew-yang-coronavirus-discrimination
Andrew Yang’s piece hooks the audience immediately with a personal story about feeling racially self-conscious for the first time in years, setting the stage for a broader discussion on the rise of anti-Asian sentiment during the COVID-19 pandemic. He …
Mentor Text Analysis-Jazmyn B.
“Woke Brands”-hbomberguy
YouTuber “hbomberguy” uses the absurdity of lying around in packaging from popular brands to hook the audience in. He then uses a sarcastic tone, which might confuse the audience, but then solves that problem by connecting it to …
Mentor Text Analysis — Nael Ottman
Link to mentor text:
The #1 way to strengthen your mind is to use your body | Wendy Suzuki
The mentor text grabs the audience’s attention by Suzuki telling her story about her journey to learning about the hippocampus. She …
Mentor Text Analysis — Derek C
Link to Mentor Text:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gK6MD_8S01o&t=315s
The mentor text grabs the audience’s attention right away with animated visuals of democracy in action paired with the reporter’s calm, reflective voice. It uses research by bringing up historical events and political ideas, but …
Mentor Text Analysis ~ Kamaro D.
This mentor text uses a hook to capture the audience in the introduction. The creator hooks the viewer by talking about how companies try to trick their customers into thinking they are “Woke”. The video incorporates research from Fast Food …
mentor text analysis – Andrew C
Mentor podcast: The #1 way to strengthen your mind is to use your body | Wendy Suzuki
She hooks the audience by telling her own story on how exercise improved her work ethic. She uses research after her intro. She …
Project Proposal ~ Kamaro D.
Research Question: My research question is “How does gaming addiction form in teens”
Message: I want to teach my audience about gaming addiction in teens and describe its causes and effects on their minds.
Audience: My target audience is parents …
Project Proposal – Luka Zakaidze
My Research Question
How are athletes brains unique?
Message:
I want to teach and show my audience that exercising can benefit you physically and mentally which would make your brain unique from an average person. In other words you athletes …
