After studying professor Wu’s end comments on my FD 1, I plan to develop the two stereotypes she pointed out more. Also, I plan to go into more detail with the two scenes I introduced, the middle school and the high school scene. I’ll experiment with being more clearer with certain points I state. Also will explain in more depth on the single story black people hold, as well as explain the stereotypical views I received from living in a brownstone. Last but not least Ill meet with a tutor at the Writing Center to help me develop and go into more details with my points/ ideas.
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