Practice Reflection and Rhetorical Analysis and Quotes – Bithiah

Part 3 Reflection

I agree with the information provided by the author. I would place more emphasis on Matt Cadwell’s comment, which states, “School kills curiosity. When do children get to ask questions about things that interest them? As soon as they are at primary school, they have to shut up and learn. It is not the fault of the teachers. They have so many targets to meet,” (pg. 2). This quote holds special meaning for me since I believe the phrase “School kills curiosity” is even more true when children first start primary school. Another part of the quote by Matt Cadwell I completely agree with is that the targets kids must meet rob them of curiosity. When children reach primary school, they become more conscious of the decisions they must make; they understand that they must work hard to obtain good grades to succeed in their classes. At this point, teachers have a wide range of subjects to cover, and as a result, they assign the children several targets they must meet to succeed in their classes. Some children opt not to ask questions because they want to pass their classes and complete all their tasks. This supports the text’s claim that high-performing students were found to be less curious because they perceived curiosity as a risk to their success. High-performing students take their education seriously, and because of the targets they must meet, they limit their queries to only those that will help them reach their goals.

Part 4: Rhetorical Analysis

The Guardian article, “’Schools Are Killing Curiosity’: Why We Need to Stop Telling Children to Shut up and Learn,” by Wendy Berliner, is a feature piece. The audience is the general reading public. The purpose of this article is to inform. The author’s writing style is factual. She employs research facts to back up her claim. This piece has a logical tone. Berliner successfully persuades readers by using the appeal of logos. Berliner is a credible source because she is the author of a book titled “How to Succeed at School. What Every Parent Should Know.” The guardian is a reliable source because they were rated the most trustworthy online UK newspaper brand – ranked as such by 73% of regular readers. The guardian’s values include encouraging a welcoming and open culture, standing up for what they think is right rather than what seems convenient, and aiming for perfection to serve their audience’s interests.

Part 5 Notable Quotables

“Promoting curiosity is a foundation for early learning that we should be emphasizing more when we look at academic achievement,” by Dr. Prachi Shah, a developmental and behavioral pediatrician at Mott, (pg. 1).

“School kills curiosity. When do children get to ask questions about things that interest them? As soon as they are at primary school, they have to shut up and learn. It is not the fault of teachers. They have so many targets to meet,” by Matt Caldwell, the headteacher of the nursery school, (pg. 2).

“We do need to find some time for questions during the day. There is not enough time in schools for creativity and following up on curiosity,” by Paul Howard-Jones, professor of neuroscience and education at Bristol University, (pg.2).

5 thoughts on “Practice Reflection and Rhetorical Analysis and Quotes – Bithiah”

  1. Excellent work!

    Just a few things in the Reflection —

    You write: This quote holds special meaning for me since I believe the phrase “School kills curiosity” is even more true when children first start primary school. DONT STOP here! A sentence or two on why this is more true for primary school children.

    So what do you think about these points that you bring up: Some children opt not to ask questions because they want to pass their classes and complete all their tasks. AND what do you think about: High-performing students take their education seriously, and because of the targets they must meet, they limit their queries to only those that will help them reach their goals. INSTEAD of just repeating the MI’s, go on to explain what you Bithiah think about students who don’t ask questions and stick to the plan. Would you say that the high performing students have lost their own agency, their own individual mind, their own individual questioning minds, in pursuit of getting good grades. What do you think of students prioritizing grades over following their own curiosity? Have you felt vicitimized in this way?

    PUt more of whaat YOU think. It’s ok to repeat the MI’s of the article here in the Reflection but you must add your OWN ideas, your own original thoughts.

    Your Rhetorical Analysis is very good!

    Everythng Overall Excellent!

  2. Bithiah — this NYT opinionator blog piece by Yancy is very very interesting. It’s 2013 so it’s a little old, but are you thinking of using it for your op-ed? It could be considered an op-ed, so I would allow you to use it.

    The second link in the Guardian is an interview, so it’s a different genre than an op-ed or a feature piece or a news piece.

    Do you have your TWO sources?

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