Peer Review for Personal Narrative essay

Julian Torrecampo

9/29/14

ENG 1101-D332

Peer Review

Topic Sentence

  1. I hate having to adjust to change, but I always have to deal with it because sometimes good things come out of it.
  2. I find it hard having to change the routine I follow for a long period of time.
  3. I have come to a realization that there would always be change.
  4. Nothing in this world is permanent, changes are brought into our lives and how we deal with it depends upon ourselves.

Transitional Phrases

  • call me pessimistic on this issue
  • due to that
  • so therefore
  • as needed

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