Finding Your Voice

Category: Unit 1 Rough Draft (Page 1 of 4)

Rough draft

Middle school and high school are two complete different worlds for different people . It goes from being a kid to being a teenager. A whole transition in which you almost don’t expect to experience at such early notice. Early morning breezy weather to moisty afternoons was the usual first month of the school year. Backtrack to early summers I had to go to this program that my school required to attend just so we can get used to the whole experience and possibly have a head start with making friends and that’s Exactly what had happened. New people, new surroundings, and new experiences was at the tip of the brisk humid air surrounding all of us on a sweaty Wednesday morning.we all got used to each other quick and for a surprise I felt almost comfortable and didn’t think mY first year of high school would be one of the worst years of my educational life. I wasn’t always a bright student but I wasn’t always a bad student either. If I tried I succeeded, and if I didn’t , I failed miserably. Most high schools usually have their specified curriculum in which helps the system in the school be balanced with the way the kids function academically etc. My first ever parent-teacher conference I remember my English teacher Ms.Yang in which she always tried her fullest to push us to our limit no matter how easy or hard the material was for us. I remember her gentle yet informative words telling my mom how I have a low average but she still has potential in seeing me improve. I didn’t believe her at first but throughout time I started actually improving without even noticing, until a week before spring break where almost evrytjing changed for me, from being a social butterfly to not talking to a single soul for the rest of the year to the first month of sophomore year. Let’s just say I was in the wrong situation at the wrong time with the wrong surroundings. Who would know that you can even consider  friends “family”. Safety Transfer was my only option and so I did that. I risked my academics for my safety. I can’t really say how I feel about this action of moving on, but who knows where my life would be if everything else was handled differently. 

That wasn’t the only transfer though. High school was supposed to be those years you always remembered, good or bad, no matter what, and well for me, I mostly hope I don’t remember these early memories I had in high school. A lot of it not only had to do with personal issues but academically wise. A school is supposed to be a second place you’re supposed to feel safe at and know that no harm can be caused for you there. It should be a place in which you at least feel comfortable learning. My second transfer has to be another safety one but because this was an actual horrible school that almost took advantage of my  education into sugarcoating the way I did my studies. Trying to fulfill that transfer was way harder becuase I had to try my hardest to prove that my grades were actually valid and if they can possibly transfer the credits I’ve already made instead of redoing a year. Covid happened. Evrytjing just seemed to keep tumbling on my lap and I felt like it was out of my control to be at least at peace with my education and just live my teenage years. Senior year was the calmest year I’ve had. I made mutuals and my best friend, I’ve gained confidence with being independent in different ways and finding myself again with enjoying school to its full limit. Not until I asked for what was promised to me . To graduate early , to see how much my hard work was payed off. The extra nights I would stay up to do as much work possible, anything that had to be done for school I knew I had to do it, and that was taken away from me when they immediately told me they couldn’t, felt like yet another big slap across my face. They did tell me though if I stay finish my year and do my Spanish regents test that I will earn an advanced regents diploma. Another lie. The educational system has not taught me anything but test my trust, my limit, and my importance with what or how I matter. They make it seem like everything you do is just for them and unfortunately the only thing you gain back is stress and a piece of paper with some words to justify if you’re capable of having a future.


I know lastly with these experiences I learn to not get fooled or at least manipulated to thinking there’s better options to what I know is ENOUGH for me. College is my next big chapter in life and I hope the next folllowing years I spend here getting my degrees aren’t another big slap across the face.

Final Reflection

 

Starting college had such a big impact on me, I was happy to start this new journey but for some reason I realized that it gets hard if only you put your mind into it.  Bad k in high-school I was always a big fan of wetting because it was a way I would express myself when wasn’t able to speak or for myself in general, it has thought me so much and where you should really start to take your writing skills important. It can bring you as far because writing and reading are two of the major thing society would eventually use in their daily life. I wasn’t exactly good at it, or thought of it as something I would’ve actually enjoyed.  This course has thought me a lot, specially about things that I didn’t know before, or the using of other apps, that was something I was struggling with when I first enter the semester was to get used to the app and way homework is being posted. It  was also a requirement for my major which I would later use, in order to improve my writing. I had to change the way I would write within a matter of min when writing a long sentence, I had to make sure that I am at least using college words, and had to me sure that I sound good for my readers, at any given moment. But one thing I can also say about this class is how you don’t need to master at either writing or reading to be good/// as long as you are trying your best. I learned from my peers and the professor itself, all of the feedbacks which encourage me to do ore, and best. All of these have helped me in ways I can’t even explain.

After High school I worked on managing my time more, because I think its something that a lot of people might be struggling with. I used to have problem with doing homework on time, and even sending them on time back in high school. I decided to set a habit to always wok on the homework posted the day that its being posted, because the way I can finish it before the due date. The one major subject that I am currently struggling with but am trying my best is math, I as never a big fan of math but throughout my middle/high school year I would always try to do my best in the class, which ended up happening. I never once thought coming to college would make math so hide for me,   I would try a problem In class but once I am alone or no one to work with I attempt to have panic attack on how it will come out, I also do struggle with remembering things. That’s one of the reason why I tried my best to keep count of all my work in this course as possible. This caused me to procrastinate in the class and can be very unfocused and not being Abe to do well on quizzes, or exam, that’s why I decided to change my ways and make a habit for myself to always be practicing math problems, every time I get a chance.

 

I really really love this project it was by far one of the work that we spent quite an amount of time working on. I was able to get a lot of details for my topic which was really really hard because I didn’t want to end up sounding the same for every paragraph I would wrote. It was in a way a sad topic because of hoe everyone is familiar to it, and all of the this is actually real. I would hope in my next course it would be or at least feel the same as this one because it was very straightforward to understand. Nothing was hard about it, the task was ride and clear and the teacher itself is a good listener, as well as teaching. I feel like I do have a favorite assignment that we did in class, but because they’re all were really good I can’t keep count but to say all of them was really nice and understanding.

After every work that was given I learned a lot on how to improve my writing. I feel better because materials was easy enough that I didn’t really have questions for, and was able to understand most parts.

To conclude in this ELA course  my skills have change overtime I am also becoming more interested in writing, reading more. I also learned that in order to improve, you have to keep with not only the work that its being posted but also in class assignment and participating in a way that you can, and to just stay quiet. That way you would learned/know about the material faster than you know it. That’s exactly why I tried to keep my homework  around 100% in everything. I would also tried to track the level of my writing skills in any essay I am writing before sending it over. I was really scared that I was going to have a Mid average in this class but found out that I am always on track with everything (I tried to be) and for that I was really happy, because English was never a course that I would do bad in. I loved every skills that the professor used in this class, because it boost my writing skills that I didn’t really have before. Now  I am able to know step by step how to write an argumentative essay and all the other essays without missing any steps that we covered in class. I can use these skills in the future for myself so I can outgrow and also help either my peers while in class, and outside Family/friends.

 

12/13 Unit one self review

  • What do l do well in this assignment? 

the usage of big words

 

  • What is my main point? What is the “so what” of this paper?

My main point was for people to understand the struggle of black suffrage in America

 

  • Who is my audience? Do I use the right language and tone to reach that audience?

My audience is the teachers, students, family members and every head police departments

 

  • What specific part(s) of the essay were a bit confusing? Why?

I don’t think any part of my essay was confusing

 

  • What specifically could I do to clarify the unclear parts of this writing? * (see below for suggestions)

rereading can be one to help this essay

 

  • What details, facts, or stories could you add to enhance the essay?

I don’t think I need any more details to add to enhance my essay.

 

  • What specific detail(s) do not work could be cut from the essay or could be moved within the essay for more clarity?

Nothing needs to be cut because the story won’t flow without each part.

Hw for 12/8/2022 Artists Statement

I became interested in this topic because I also did a project about it back in high school, and I was involved with other organizations as well that had something to do with immigrants refugee, and the struggle that the black community goes through. It’s a topic that really touches my heart, because talking about it might sound disturbing to the audience do to the things that be happening to us(black) In America. Another reason why I was interesting in writing this was because it was a topic that I am able to express my feelings more to it, than any other topics. People need to realized that this might never stop they will keep treating black like old time (slavery time) and its so not fair because we’ve protested as many time as we can, we started really slow and not doing too much. We did not even start with violence, but at one point of time we were giving  them our voice and they (cops) were giving us their bullets. Enough was said and we decided to go harder, because our voice wasn’t being heard.

The purpose of the making this project was because of the lack of success society has once again failed the black community in America. And I am directing this informations to students, Families, teachers  and all the local/private police department which include the government as well. Because there the one who once suppose to protect us, but they are hurting us in any process.

I picked this genre (poem) because I feel like it’s another way of expressing how you’re feeling  truthfully or people in general. I am usually used to power point type, or docs but I decided to go with poem because it was a better way to basically wrap up everything in this project.

Doing this project was really fun and a lot of emotions such as: sad, anger, patience, and also doubtful. It went pretty well overall the only thing I was scared of was repeating myself over and over again which I definitely did not want, and did not come across so I am happy for that. I had to change the topic question, just so it can match the whole writing.

Now that its done I definitely think it turned out okay for the most part, it was a poem I did not want to make it too long, or too short I just kept it simple and mid to understand. Yes I went over it so many time and even end up changing my thoughts overtime about how and what would I be writing in this poem. I don’t think there anything I would’ve done different maybe next poem to be a bit longer than this one, I am just happy I reached this far without missing any steps, because that was one of my worries to I feel like it wasn’t hard or easy more so in the middle, at least for me. I think so because you’ll need to focus in order to be thinking about what will you write, this as a college project was so awesome to me because I never thought I would be doing that in college (meaning I thought it would’ve been way harder, and different) it reminds me of my old self back in high school. I can perfectly say that I see myself doing using all of these tools later in the future, as I did making this project.

 

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