In the unit one assignment one thing I did well in is being able to be descriptive and use dialogue. When writing it makes the story more interesting and more imaginable when you use those two things in your writing. The main point of unit one was to show people that education is a serious thing and we have to keep students engaged and informed about education. My audience was students, teachers, and the education system. I feel like this would be a good audience because no only are they are apart of the education system, but they have the power and voice to do something about the problems the education system has. I wasn’t really confused with any parts of this unit because I understood what I was doing but I was more worried if it would be a good paper or not. Some details that I could have added in my writing was more quotes and be more detailed in parts where I was explaining when I would skip class. I think I did a good job and I didn’t have to take anything out of my assignment of unit one. Maybe I could have added more sequences in my writing to make it flow a lot more better.
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I became interested in this topic because I also did a project about it back in high school, and I was involved with other organizations as well that had something to do with immigrants refugee, and the struggle that the black community goes through. It’s a topic that really touches my heart, because talking about it might sound disturbing to the audience do to the things that be happening to us(black) In America. Another reason why I was interesting in writing this was because it was a topic that I am able to express my feelings more to it, than any other topics. People need to realized that this might never stop they will keep treating black like old time (slavery time) and its so not fair because we’ve protested as many time as we can, we started really slow and not doing too much. We did not even start with violence, but at one point of time we were giving them our voice and they (cops) were giving us their bullets. Enough was said and we decided to go harder, because our voice wasn’t being heard.
The purpose of the making this project was because of the lack of success society has once again failed the black community in America. And I am directing this informations to students, Families, teachers and all the local/private police department which include the government as well. Because there the one who once suppose to protect us, but they are hurting us in any process.
I picked this genre (poem) because I feel like it’s another way of expressing how you’re feeling truthfully or people in general. I am usually used to power point type, or docs but I decided to go with poem because it was a better way to basically wrap up everything in this project.
Doing this project was really fun and a lot of emotions such as: sad, anger, patience, and also doubtful. It went pretty well overall the only thing I was scared of was repeating myself over and over again which I definitely did not want, and did not come across so I am happy for that. I had to change the topic question, just so it can match the whole writing.
Now that its done I definitely think it turned out okay for the most part, it was a poem I did not want to make it too long, or too short I just kept it simple and mid to understand. Yes I went over it so many time and even end up changing my thoughts overtime about how and what would I be writing in this poem. I don’t think there anything I would’ve done different maybe next poem to be a bit longer than this one, I am just happy I reached this far without missing any steps, because that was one of my worries to I feel like it wasn’t hard or easy more so in the middle, at least for me. I think so because you’ll need to focus in order to be thinking about what will you write, this as a college project was so awesome to me because I never thought I would be doing that in college (meaning I thought it would’ve been way harder, and different) it reminds me of my old self back in high school. I can perfectly say that I see myself doing using all of these tools later in the future, as I did making this project.
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