Author: Muzzamil (Page 1 of 8)

I think what I did well with this assignment is that I used alot of personal experiences to back up my main point and those experiences help the reader better understand what I’m am trying to portray.

My main point was how test can be detrimental to a students leaning and how nowadays, teachers teach to make their students pass their test and look good, instead of truly teaching the material.

My audience is the education system and teachers in general. I think my language and the tone i used could be better but it is sufficient enough to get my point across.

I think the beginning of the essay where I described education and the education system could be removed because it isn’t quite clear and my essay would be better off without it,