• Some things I do well in this assignment are using figurative language and transitioning
  • The main point of my paper was to show people that making mistakes is okay, that you can always come back and come out stronger than you did before
  • My audience is students, I believe I used the right language and tone to reach that audience
  • The last paragraph of the paper was a bit confusing because it transitioned so quick.
  • I don’t know if I can add anything to the paper as it is already so long. Instead I can cut very small parts out of the paper and make them more meaningful because when I’m reading through the paper at certain parts it sounds like I’m just writing to meet the word count.