- I think that I spoke from experience and did a very good job with what I was saying
- The main point is to show how education can play a big role in our lives and how the education system could engage students more in learning
- My audience is students/ teachers// parents/ educators system. I think think that they students should get to know more about the education system and have the chance to learn more and get a chance to be interested in topics. And the education system should be able to know how they could fix this issue and know that kids aren’t interested
- maybe my second to last paragraph because it didn’t really flow with the story kind of
- I’m would try to fix it and revise it
- I’m going to add more descriptions and dialogue in the story
- I don’t really know what I would remove
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