12/13 Unit one self review

• What do l do well in this assignment? 

the usage of big words

• What is my main point? What is the “so what” of this paper?

My main point was for people to understand the struggle of black suffrage in America

• Who is my audience? Do I use the right language and tone to reach that audience?

My audience is the teachers, students, family members and every head police departments

• What specific part(s) of the essay were a bit confusing? Why?

I don’t think any part of my essay was confusing

• What specifically could I do to clarify the unclear parts of this writing? * (see below for suggestions)

rereading can be one to help this essay

• What details, facts, or stories could you add to enhance the essay?

I don’t think I need any more details to add to enhance my essay.

• What specific detail(s) do not work could be cut from the essay or could be moved within the essay for more clarity?

Nothing needs to be cut because the story won’t flow without each part.